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Girl of My Dreams

Been searching high, been searching low For a gal I could spend my life with Found one but she's got a pimply bum And real bad breath, take a whiff! She's no dreamboat, sunken ship perhaps She walks with a limp and she stutters I've just got no luck, in a quandary I'm stuck Soon be old and decrepit, and I mutter Maybe it's me that might be the problem No Adonis though at one time I thought so Just coz I dribble and spit in the street Down inside I'm really quite sweet though! Surely there's a chance that I'll find her soon They say there's a mate for all lovers I'm sure she's out there, a gal I'd be proud of Not one that has wings and can hover! © Jack Ellison 2012

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Date: 3/31/2018 3:14:00 AM
"She's no dreamboat, sunken ship perhaps" lol! Funny one, great little rhymes! Always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/31/2018 5:46:00 AM
I was silly even back then... thought it was a recent thing!!! LOL XOX
Date: 11/7/2012 11:02:00 AM
She doesn't sound too appealing for a poet like yourself, but I was always told there is someone out there for everyone, so do keep looking!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/7/2012 1:31:00 PM
Not too appealing at all! LOL Have a great day! Hugs, Jack
Date: 10/28/2012 9:30:00 PM
Oh No! Never give up hope... Maybe you'll be as lucky as my hubby... Tho they do say I have a face made for radio... And a voice that should be used under water! LOL... Hi I'm back! I'm with my Dad in Arizona while he finishes 2 more months of chemotherapy... The last one put him in the hospital... But I got him out for the moment, I can borrow his computer occasionally... your friend Carol
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/29/2012 5:11:00 AM
Always look forward to your witty comments, my dear Carol! "A face made for radio!" LOL My very best wishes for your dad, sweet friend! Love, Jack
Date: 10/27/2012 2:34:00 PM
You bring much smiles here.. love it... Michael
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/28/2012 4:17:00 AM
Thank you my friend! Happy to put a smile on your face... cheers and happy thoughts!
Date: 10/27/2012 4:35:00 AM
I'm here ........................xx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/27/2012 4:38:00 AM
ROTFLMAO!!! Checking the airlines for the next flight! Love ya! Big hugs, Jack xxx
Date: 10/27/2012 4:25:00 AM
Very funny! Love it!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/27/2012 4:40:00 AM
Hi Sharon! Glad you got a kick out of my silliness this morning... love and big hugs, Jack

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