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Girl In a Peach Dress

Did you ever see a girl Sitting with a peach dress on One of those shorter dresses That fans out with many ruffles With beautiful peach stockings That go up to the knees And soft leather shoes That she would wear on her feet She also would have peach roses On intertwined within her hair This girl would be so cute Your heart would skip a beat Have you ever seen her before She’s out there, I just know it For I have seen her somewhere For her image is in my head Her peach dress, her stockings Her leather shoes and roses All have a certain feel She’s out there somewhere Did you ever see this girl Russell Sivey Contest: How about some free verse Sponsor: Kim Morrison 5/28/2013

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 5/30/2013 5:04:00 PM

very cute poem yo got here. I think it might be on the winning end ;}

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/29/2013 7:23:00 AM

Very descriptive and colorful work that you have written..We bought some fresh Georgia peaches on Monday and they were red very red in color..Not the peach color that I remember from years gone by..Of course, the inner peach was somewhat yellow or golden..Strange how I remember the ones from years ago and the color was that soft peach color..Thanks for stopping by...This free verse reads like winning material to me..Good luck in the contest..Sara

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/28/2013 9:46:00 AM

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Cory Long

Date: 5/28/2013 7:27:00 AM

Not only do I love to read your poetry and the great pictures you paint, but I love receiving your feed back, This poem is a gem like you take care and have a wonderful day. Cory

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/28/2013 6:15:00 AM

An adorable image you've carved out with words. I can see her through your wordings. Well done and good luck. AO

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/28/2013 12:43:00 AM

This was just... peachy! Sorry for the cheese, but I just had to say it! There's a different feel to your work when you refrain from rhyming... it's very introspective and it makes you think. Sometimes the girl of your dreams is so vivid in your for head you fool yourself into believing she's a living, breathing person... don't let her run away ;)