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Gifts For Brian

Open a world of words as prolonging as angel life, No second lost, no sign of loss, the moments feel so right Into a bud of a cherished life, what a song I drink this night Cradled by a stranger's smile, an imminent trail of light You are a frown's paradise, a thirst's ever-filling cup As subtle as a thoughtful sky, when rain fills not enough Differences of years are taciturn gainst this ancient stone so rough For in this breach of curious faith, in strength we are lifted up No sign of loss,no blade to scrape the lines that flow in blue With a heart creating what touch cannot, I hand these gifts to you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/10/2014 12:44:00 PM
This cuts the mind open with multiple interpretations but its underlying darkness never disappears. The words are also cleverly placed together that, when read aloud, creates an aural tapestry.
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Date: 3/9/2014 12:03:00 AM
Great verse. Very up beat. I think Brian will be a happy person to have your love. ~Kilmer
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Date: 3/7/2014 12:22:00 PM
Very beautiful Laura, fulfilling the potential of Poetry. Poetry can very well be just as powerful as physical touch. Awesome affection in this poem my friend. J.A.B.
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