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gifting more than gold

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For:Senryu's 3 Rhymed By 3 Unrhymed Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Hilo Poet

the lake's clear crystal belies the ice hold's brittle grasp yet I'm blissful the springtime's warm sun will quickly disperse the fun blossoms have begun in hearts young and old flirts and flirting growing bold gifting more than gold summer's golden sun brings forth the bursting blossoms as lovers embrace beneath the bowers sweet youngsters are holding hands with time and pleasure slipping towards dusk the wise old men remember the first touch of spring.

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Hilo Poet

Date: 5/1/2024 1:22:00 AM

Words found poetic posture in their natural state graduating with honors to being part of a unique class that defined poetry as its righteous accord in literature with this 1st Place Trophy as being the best in the Senryu contest. Bravo, Chetta--thanks for this FAVE, and Aloha my friend, William.

Chetta Achara
Date: 5/1/2024 6:44:00 AM

Thank you. I am thrilled by this win.