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Ghosts of the Night

In dampness of night Ghosts play in the candlelight Their shrieks cloud the sky They have translucent bodies To move in and out of things Ghosts stirring around Carrying with them great fear That moves them forward Screaming with your heart inside Laughing at your awesome fear
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/28/2012 1:47:00 PM
I never had a visit from one Rusty but your ghosts seem like they would be fun toknow. There's still time to be haunted! :)
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Date: 8/28/2012 12:33:00 PM
I'm just loving all these Halloween poems of yours, Russell. Loved imagining these ghosts : )
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Date: 8/28/2012 8:09:00 AM
Very nice description... Terry
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Date: 8/28/2012 3:50:00 AM
love the eerie yet downright amazing feel of this piece, russell... it goes to my head!.. enthralled my friend.. best wishes and hugggs!..;)
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Date: 8/27/2012 11:07:00 PM
my ghosts were friendly not, stood round me bed forget me, got, when i blocked em out those few, shut off the third eye view, didna want them hot-en-tots "GOOGLE EDGAR CAYCE the American Prophet. search green glass for more info... The green glass filters out the harmful radiation and lets the healing rays through.. Im also trying 20% ultraviolet green window tape...so i can nap in the green sunlight.. no sunburn either:)"
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Date: 8/27/2012 10:16:00 PM
Soon, you will have a very sizable anthology of Halloween poetry. This is another good one.
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Date: 8/27/2012 9:50:00 PM
A haunting write. I like how you personify the ghost as enjoying our fear. Perhaps they really do feed off of it my friend? Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 8/27/2012 8:57:00 PM
I hate it when things go bump in the night.. chilling write Russell xxx Hugs
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Date: 8/27/2012 8:49:00 PM
I really like that line: their shrieks cloud the sky. GREAT imagery with that one!
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