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Ghosts of Gettysburg

This sacred soil that once resounded with the musket's rattle, Imbued with mingled blood of Blue and Gray spilt in brutal battle, Now stands serene with only whisperings of the restless ghosts, Of gallant men who sacrificed their all among the frenzied hosts. Are those the sighs of vagabond souls heard with each subtle breeze, As zephyrs rustle the dancing leaves of stalwart, guardian trees? Is that the winter's wind that shrieks about Round Top Hill, Or the screams of dying troopers, their fatal destiny to fulfill? Are those the moans of men left to die, their laurels won, Or the boles of ancient pines groaning 'neath the searing sun? The wind wafts tall grasses that on The Wheatfield grow; Could this be waves of spectral infantry, advancing row by row? Lightning flashes and thunder echoes across the rolling sectors, Reminiscent of once roaring cannon, now long-silent specters. The battle was o'er with the repulse of daring General Pickett; Thousands of souls lay dead on bloody field and tangled thicket. Lincoln's powerful address yet echoes o'er that hallowed clay, To honor heroes, no matter the color of cloth they wore that day. Do their fretful spirits yet roam, wondering if they died in vain? Rest in peace dear souls - because of you this nation rose again! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Placed No. 4 the Fraser/Devonshire "Dazzle Us With History" Contest - Jan 2011

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Date: 4/13/2013 10:05:00 PM
BOB, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Take care, and enjoy the new upcoming week. Always & Forever! GOODNIGHT **LINDA**
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Date: 4/11/2013 10:05:00 AM
I've lauded this one before, Sarge. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 4/8/2013 8:36:00 AM
really great write, as a scot only know from from what I've read as I'm very interested in american history and just watching john adams on DVD. But excellent write, by the way what did you think of the Gettysburg movie starred martin sheen?, I liked it but you being more of an expert on it so interested on your view. Have a blessed day, Gordon
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Date: 4/12/2011 5:15:00 PM
The rise of one nation and the fall of another nation! Nice job commemorating the lives that were sacrificed on that fateful day. Lee on one fateful morn thought that Confederate chivalry could trump poor tactics. Ironically, the only time that he would make that costly mistake.
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Date: 1/16/2011 2:13:00 PM
Got to tell you that gave me goosebumps!!! Great write as always. Light & Love from a fan!
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Date: 1/14/2011 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Bob in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Dazzle Us With History". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/14/2011 7:37:00 AM
Awesome, Sarge. Excellent account. Enjoyed. Well deserved win. Have a great weekend. Ralphie.
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Date: 1/14/2011 4:05:00 AM
Hi Robert L. Congratulations on your achievement with this fine historical piece, Eamon
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Date: 1/13/2011 8:37:00 PM
I wish I could award you a higher rank than '7', for this is an incredibly good, good poem. The words, the sentiment, the rhythm, everything works; and the end is simply beautiful. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Very well done. My best, Deb
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Date: 1/13/2011 2:03:00 PM
Good one..Congratultions on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/13/2011 11:55:00 AM
Congratulations Bob on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/13/2011 11:37:00 AM
Robert, when I read your 'Ghosts of Gettysburg' it made me smile widely. For what reason, the realism of the moment. Your wonderful written piece captured me straight away. There will never be another war where soldiers of both sides march towards each other like cannon fodder. Many congratulations on your fourth place, and thank you for taking me on a history trip, most enjoyable....:)
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Date: 1/13/2011 10:34:00 AM
I think this may be the best thing of yours Ive ever read..missed it the first time around. It flows perfectly..You should be very proud of your win. BG soup mail..BG
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Date: 1/13/2011 10:13:00 AM
A big part of our history and you wrote it so well. Congratulations Robert. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/13/2011 9:57:00 AM
Congratulations on taking fourth place with this outstanding write, Bob. James and I judged separately assigning points to all entries and the competition was incredible. Just tabulating the rankings took hours. Take pride in your accomplishment. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/9/2011 2:39:00 PM
:) Thanks for supporting the contest, Bob. I did a write on the Gettysburg Ghosts myself so I am familiar with all you describe. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 6/16/2010 6:20:00 PM
You did it again Bob. The more I read of your poetry the more I am awed at your inner feelings. It a real honor to get to know you. Your tribute to our fallen heroes is humbling. Into my favorites this one goes. God Bless, Cile
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Date: 1/12/2010 6:10:00 PM
Wow, such a tribute to all fallen soldiers who have so bravely fought for American's freedom. A wonderful write, sir. Thank you for sharing. Caryl
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Date: 1/12/2010 2:35:00 PM
Oh my goodness, Robert! I researched and wrote on this same topic. Excellent work! Check out my "Gettysburg Hauntings" if you get a chance because you'll be struck by the similarities in our writes. Perhaps we should work on a historical piece together sometime? Love, Carolyn
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