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Ghosts In the East End of London(John Loving Iii's Haunting Pass)

1888 the year of terror and fear throats slitted open from ear to ear JACK THE RIPPER preying on the road He 's spooky and wears a black coat In the evenings his skills paint red lace so good at his job,he kills as he plays In Croaky Moors hiding his shadows roaming in alleys and meadows Five victims ,Five whores slasshed to death Breasts thorn apart,their hearts on the bed a stalker,a cannibal in East End of London drinking in bars,His hiding a dungeon The prostitutes tongues pulled out from their roots sending the killer in the best of his moods Years passed come and gone,each dusk cover dawn five ghosts are heard aching in one brutal moan Jack's name still an echo in the narrow back streets Soul's blood is still shedding,for justice it pleads Scothland yard officers were being fooled from "Hell" and "Dear Boss"letters,Jack ruled Ruben and i tried to capture this cold blooded guy, but we'll pass it on to J.R, Investigator with Style Go for it John... -------------------------CHARMA

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/21/2009 1:43:00 PM
most excellent and blood curdling recounting! Light & Love
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Date: 7/21/2009 8:33:00 AM
AWESOME write about the maniac mass murderer "Jack The Ripper"...........:JP)
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Date: 7/20/2009 10:13:00 PM
Great narrative Charmaine, should be enough gore. Ha, God bless Moses
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Date: 7/20/2009 7:26:00 PM
Great take on Jack the Ripper, Charma! I have seen some documentaries on his killings and there was some speculation that "Jack" was actually a member of the British royal family. Of course, we'll probably never know the truth. All that remains are the stories -- and the one you tell is awesome! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/20/2009 6:07:00 PM
Yikes.....I WILL NOT SLEEP TONIGHT!! Great job, Charmaine !!!
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Date: 7/20/2009 5:04:00 PM
MAGNIFICENT! Charmaine!!!! "souls blood is still shedding" cool!! you have never frightened me before! Charma! ....but I'm "shiverin' me timbers!" now!!!! great work! jimbo
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Date: 7/20/2009 4:10:00 PM
WOW! you did it. this is a magnificant piece for the game. and it ranks up there with the top two, good work. john h loving iii
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