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Ghost Tides Contest

haunted stones cower gray mist shrouds the ocean's edge hopes for fishing die

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2010 10:21:00 PM

I like how you worked a little tale into this one. Congratulations! lUv, andrea

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/26/2010 5:15:00 PM

Virginia, This haiku is a beautiful entry and I am so glad it was recognized in the winner's circle. Congratulations! Blessings, Connie

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/26/2010 4:56:00 PM

Congratulations and kudos! Virginia, you are in the winners’ circle with your haiku entry in Ghost Tides Sponsored by: Raul Moreno. "Haunted stones cower..." is my favorite part. Keep those creative words flowing! Smiles, Dane Ann

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/24/2010 10:08:00 AM

I think this is very good, Virginia! My congratulations to you on your win in the contest. Peace, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/24/2010 3:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Ghost Tides Contest Virginia. Love, Carol

Marty Owens

Date: 2/23/2010 5:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/23/2010 4:49:00 PM

Congrats Virginia on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a wonderful victory for an amazing write.. enjoy ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Date: 2/23/2010 2:32:00 PM

You have me smiling with your last line. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Enjoy your success. Karen

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/23/2010 1:40:00 PM

Different and I enjoyed it. Congrats on your success in the contest. BG

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/23/2010 1:34:00 PM

Virginia, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/23/2010 3:07:00 AM

Great idea to write about from the picture. Should do well in the contest. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Susan Palli

Date: 2/21/2010 3:08:00 AM

so well written!

Eleanore Bourner

Date: 2/20/2010 7:38:00 PM

excellent, good luck :) ------Ell