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Her beauty blooms the shadows – haunting Svelte demure, with fragile veil Unseen to those who would possess Just one lover – nimbus, roars with flashing eyes Fervent kisses falling - blushing alabaster Druid torrents, sating every curve 04 Jun 2020 Note: The ghost orchid (pale white) is one of the rarest

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Date: 2/22/2022 7:05:00 AM
A remarkably sketched tribute to the pale white ochid. Your word choice avoids cliche + soars. Best wishes, Brian
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Date: 6/9/2020 7:14:00 PM
Congrats, Dave! I love the sensual imagery...blessings, Rhonda xx
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Date: 6/8/2020 9:15:00 AM
"fragile veil","druid torrents"...you weave a sensual poetry with mystic words David. Congratulations on your win :)
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