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Ghost Lover

He Whispers Poetic words In the heat of love Dreaming of tomorrows truth I fall onto a hopeless dream Awaken By the emptiness Of rumbled bed sheets The song birds singing on window sills As the sun rises yet again and again and again Coffee cup filled with tears, loneliness fills the years

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Carole Duet

Date: 8/1/2017 12:30:00 AM

Hi Aurore. This is really a fine poem. It really "touched" me. By-the-way, don't you mean "rumpled" rather than "rumbled" in the 2nd verse?

Phil Capitano

Date: 7/24/2017 10:02:00 AM

Sadness is a cross we all bare from time to time, they are symbols of our trust in love. Good one Aurore.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/18/2017 12:54:00 AM

Excellent. Beautifully said. Sad too. Thanks for sharing it.

Lin Lane

Date: 7/17/2017 7:43:00 AM

Hello, Aurore. Your last line is a complete poem unto itself.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/17/2017 5:19:00 AM

This tugs at the heart, dear. Very heart wrenching. When actions don't back up words, heartache ensues. Sending hugs

Tim Smith

Date: 7/16/2017 11:00:00 PM

Beautifully written but oh so sad dear. I hope the ghost would disappear and happiness fill its place...a favorite