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"The more enlightened our houses are, the more their walls ooze ghosts."- Italo Calvino We moved into an inherited old house with a friendly ghost, our house is an old Victorian built along the mid coast. Our ghost is not threatening, scary, or causes any fears, We believe she is the lady of the house and has been for years. We first noticed her strong scent of lilacs filling the room, while outside there were no lilacs or flowers in bloom. We have awoken to smells of tea and freshly baked apple pie, and often find her teacup on the counter left clean and dry. She can be a prankster and will sometimes hide our house keys, we frantically search and then suddenly find them with ease. She also moves our clothes, pillows and takes our old shoes, we are not sure why but think she’s keeping herself amused. Our young grandson came over one weekend to stay overnight, and told us he met the sweet lady in his room dressed in white. That weekend he screamed as he fell over the banister railing, panicked as we ran down expecting to find him hurt and wailing. He was smiling as he sat perfectly upright in an empty plant pot, and said the old lady caught him as he fell and put him in this spot. We were relieved he was not hurt, did not have a scrape or a scratch, and thanked our ghost lady of the house for her life saving catch! 2/23/23 Contest: Writing Challenge - G Words- Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France ( checked with rhymezone) * This is a fictional poem but based on an experience I had as a child. We lived in a haunted home. I was four years old and fell over the banister. My parents found me sitting upright in a plant pot, not injured. For years I have wondered if I was helped to safety by a ghost.

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Date: 3/1/2023 11:47:00 PM
Tania, excellent writing of a ghost poem, and delightful too, I wonder if you indeed had a ghost help you when you fell at four years old. And congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - G Words, well done, I like the quote also, blessings, Constance
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Date: 3/2/2023 3:44:00 AM
Constance, thank you and thank you for placement!
Date: 2/27/2023 9:46:00 PM
A very amusing story, Tania. Anyone will long to stay in this kind of a haunted house with such a ghost lady as the invisible occupant!
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Date: 2/28/2023 4:18:00 AM
Valsa, thank you.
Date: 2/25/2023 11:02:00 AM
- ... yes, ghosts exist ... I'm sure ... thanks for this great story, Tania :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 2/25/2023 12:41:00 PM
Anne-Lise, thank you, hugs.
Date: 2/24/2023 7:33:00 PM
A very interesting story about ghosts. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/25/2023 3:08:00 AM
Chris, thank you.
Date: 2/24/2023 3:32:00 PM
What a charming poem, Tania, and your explanation I just loved! My dog came back some years ago. I heard her with the dry dog food but didn't see her. However, my other dog sat up, ears perked, and watched as Sassie's ghost went to her favorite spot. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/25/2023 3:09:00 AM
Ann, thank you, I hope someday my deceased pets come back to visit me.
Date: 2/24/2023 1:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Thanks for the note at the bottom. What a place to live. It must have been fun. Have a great/blessed day writing away........................
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/24/2023 1:59:00 PM
Paula, thank you.
Date: 2/24/2023 12:58:00 PM
congratulations on your contest podium win, Tania Your poem/tale is so deserving of such recognition.
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Date: 2/24/2023 1:59:00 PM
Lasaad, thank you.
Date: 2/24/2023 1:23:00 AM
Great story making the ghost a friendly one. Has its advantages. Best for a win.
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Date: 2/24/2023 3:37:00 AM
Victor, thank you.
Date: 2/23/2023 12:47:00 PM
That was really fun to read and wonderfully written Tania. I could smell the aromas around the house, lilac and apple pie. Mmmm...that was nice and the fun the ghost had. What an enchanting story...now I must ask...is it true?
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Date: 2/23/2023 3:22:00 PM
Chris, thank you. The poem is fiction but I really did fall over the banister when I was 4 or 5 and landed in a plant pot sitting upright. I have no recollection of it however.
Date: 2/23/2023 10:17:00 AM
An enjoyable read Tania, I believe in ghosts, the fact we actually exist means anything is possible. That was an amazing experience you had. Tom
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Date: 2/23/2023 3:22:00 PM
Tom, thank you.
Date: 2/23/2023 8:18:00 AM
I got caught up in the story from the beginning, and even more delighted in it to discover it was based on one of your life experiences. Good writing.
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Date: 2/23/2023 3:22:00 PM
Jenna, thank you.
Date: 2/23/2023 6:27:00 AM
What a lovely story - and such a friendly ghost. I enjoyed this - thank you.
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Date: 2/23/2023 3:22:00 PM
Peter, thank you.

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