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Getting Married at Christmas

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Getting Married at Christmas

( I have written the poem in three different forms: Quintain, Quintella and Quinzaine forms
respectively)

Getting married at Christmas


Never heard! No, I wouldn't want to marry on Christmas day.
Not Christmas Day but a few days before would be lovely! 
That would mean messing Christmas up for everyone, okay!
Apart from it making it difficult for friends and family
It would be mean and rude to share two special days selfishly.

To get the best of both the worlds with Christmassy feel
I would rather prefer to get married on the 20th December
So the reception bills and the hotel bills would be cheaper
Even a Non-Christian faith person would think in real
To keep the Christians friends away, won’t be a fair deal.

I hope one would appreciate
My humble sentiments
Wouldn’t you too?

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13-11-13
Dr. Ram Mehta
Tenth Place win
Contest: Getting married at Christmas by Shadow Hamilton

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  1. Date: 12/8/2013 10:28:00 PM
    Congrats on your fine win in the contest. I like your take on the contest. Nice one!

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 8:32:00 AM
    A very beautiful poem my dear friend Dr. Ram! I think I'll agree with you. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem and the smiles. So enjoyed. My biggest hearty congratulations on your awesome win! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 8:11:00 PM
    Ahh...nice take on the contest..congratulations Dr Ram..

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 8:04:00 AM
    Congrats on your win Dr Ram.......Roger

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 7:11:00 AM
    congrats on your win Dr Ram

  1. Date: 12/6/2013 7:11:00 PM
    Very clever to write in three forms and I am in agreement. A wedding around Christmas could be lovely. One on Christmas would be inconsiderate of your guests. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 12/6/2013 6:03:00 PM
    really enjoyed the three styles Ram congrats on placing ty for entering Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 6:49:00 AM
    very good, Dr. Ram. it is always a pleasure to read your works

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 8:21:00 PM
    Interesting poem liked Hugs Jane

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 3:10:00 PM
    I do appreciate your sentiments doctor,well penned. Thanks for your noble visits and kind words,it lifted my spirit. Thanks. Based On Belief

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 9:50:00 AM
    You have expressed some interesting points ..I love the way you wrote this...luv,Deb

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 8:59:00 AM
    You make an excellent point. On the other hand you would never forget your anniversary.

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 11:32:00 PM
    Dr. Ram, this is an interesting contest... love the way you pulled it off... xox..Linda