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Get That Winning Smile

If you're out on the town Your date gives you a frown 'Cuz you smiled at the fellow But your teeth were all yellow Don't you wait one more night Go and grab some "Crest Whites" Makes your teeth white and clean So your smile can be seen Don't embarrass yourself It's now on the store shelf Get a smile that's brand new And your date will thank you May 25,2015

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Skat A

Date: 7/19/2015 2:46:00 PM

Laura, that's a cool JINGLE! CONGRATS!!!!! SKAT

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/19/2015 3:52:00 PM

Thank, Skat! Glad you liked it :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/19/2015 12:47:00 AM

Sparkling write, Laura, congratulations, Viv

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/19/2015 3:53:00 PM

Thank you, Viv! It was a fun write :)

Eve Roper

Date: 7/18/2015 10:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your win,Laura this is funny. Hugs Eve

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/19/2015 3:54:00 PM

Glad you liked it, Eve :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/18/2015 8:02:00 PM

Laura, I'm glad to see this awesome jingle on the winners list. Congratulations! :-) Alexis

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/19/2015 3:54:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis! Glad you liked it, and it was fun to write, too :)

Tim Smith

Date: 7/18/2015 4:29:00 PM

what a great jingle...tingled all the way to the top....congrats

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/19/2015 3:55:00 PM

Thanks very much, Tim! With your great sense of humor, I'm really glad you enjoyed it :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/18/2015 1:41:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations Laura:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/19/2015 3:55:00 PM

Thanks very much, Jan :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/26/2015 5:43:00 PM

Laura,This is nice jingle. Midway through I started to smile. Sometimes we forget the importance of a smile:) Alexis

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/26/2015 7:26:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by, Alexis. It was a fun write :)

Constance La France

Date: 5/26/2015 4:33:00 PM

Laura , this is outstanding, so well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, hydro-licious

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/26/2015 5:36:00 PM

Thank you, Broken Wings, for your kind comment and rating, too! If always had "goofball" in me, ha :)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/26/2015 6:53:00 AM

Impressive jingle, Laura!! Love the sparkle:) Now we can all afford to smile! // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 5/26/2015 2:09:00 PM

:) You got it right!

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/26/2015 11:28:00 AM

I think it's spelled, ditties?!

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/26/2015 10:43:00 AM

Thanks, Paul! My dad would always be singing little "diddies" similar to this as I was growing up...comes naturally to me, ha! :)

Skat A

Date: 5/25/2015 9:13:00 PM

enjoyed your write.. *always, S.K.A.T.*

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/25/2015 11:48:00 PM

Thanks again for your kind comments, Skat :)

Seren Roberts

Date: 5/25/2015 5:56:00 PM

Loved it I did a toothpaste one as well but a short one.....Seren

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/25/2015 8:42:00 PM

Thanks, Seren! Good luck in the contest :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/25/2015 5:33:00 PM

made me smile Laura - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/25/2015 8:42:00 PM

Thanks, Jan!