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Get Over It

Sternly said.”Listen Up-You”.. It won’t ever work..get over it. Amazingly spineless in this case, This is really not like me at all. Over, never really was, OVER Damn fate brought his face in view. One sided..always knew it. Now, Put one foot forward, then the other…. MOVE ON . ORG For Kristin's contest.

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Date: 6/27/2009 10:25:00 PM
a powerful verse written with wonderful flow and descriptive rhythm,,well done,,and Thank you for the kind words that you left behind upon my poetry,,blessings..Cecil
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Date: 6/26/2009 5:49:00 PM
Barbara, I've heard those words before... It never was easy for my to get over it... But moving forward was the best thing. Good advice in this poem. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 6/24/2009 3:01:00 PM
Strong woman speaks, man sits up and listens for once>>James
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Date: 6/22/2009 10:21:00 AM
You are so wise, and this is piece shows great imagination and style. daver
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Date: 6/22/2009 7:02:00 AM
Love the directness of this piece..strong title...good work.
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Date: 6/22/2009 3:26:00 AM
Love this One barbara!<33 God luck in contest!
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Date: 6/21/2009 9:27:00 PM
truth-in-the-mirror......nice work, Barbara
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