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Get Off My Cloud

You act so proper and proud Thinking you're better than the rest of us But up here no snobs are allowed So there's just one thing left to say Hey you, get of my cloud! Your words are a sham Your comments are rude You have the manners of a pig And you look like one too So there's just one thing left to say Hey you, get off my cloud!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/18/2015 11:43:00 PM

JOSEPH, Congratulations on your cloud win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 6/16/2015 9:15:00 PM

Hello Joseph,, Congratulations on a poem well done. Thank you for entering my CLOUD contest. Luv SKAT

Joseph May
Date: 6/17/2015 5:41:00 AM

Thank you for my placement Skat

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 6/5/2015 1:11:00 PM

Terrific slam Joe! Glad you keep your cloud snob free : ) Hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/5/2015 8:50:00 AM

Reads like a winner..Way to go with this slam..Sara..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 6/3/2015 10:46:00 PM

Joseph, another wonderful poem a 7 and good luck in the contest. Thank you for your visit and reading “When A Woman Is Just A Woman”. :~) Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2015 10:09:00 PM

I LOL to read "you have the manners of a pig and you look like one too" Oh my, could you be thinking of the same person I am thinking of? In any event, this was sure a chuckler.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/3/2015 12:48:00 PM

I see that there is no need for too many words in order to produce a high quality slam. Well done Joseph! #7 // paul

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/1/2015 8:21:00 AM

That,s telling them Joseph, this is good, truly is very good

Jan Allison

Date: 6/1/2015 7:18:00 AM

ha ha ha - I have a feeling Skat will love this one! Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx