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Get Low So Low

I gave my love, my heart my soul, I gave her babes, our greatest goal; She took my heart, my eyes, my wish, And spat my love to circling fish I lost my mind, my girls, my home, She’d met a new man, pockets deep, Now I felt like an unknown poem, Anonymous verse, in stinking heap But now I’m old, with stooping gait, Soon the cosmos’ll know my fate; But to love as I did and then be thrown? Such sweet misery never to own.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/21/2015 7:33:00 AM
"and spat my love to circling fish" That line should make any man's heart run cold.
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Date: 7/21/2015 12:57:00 AM
Deeply emotional. My wife was a psychotherapist and in relationship counselling one of her questions to both parties was always, When did it change and why? Regards, Ian
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