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swirling colored glass like sternutative wonders Aaaahhh aaaahhhh Chihuly 05/24/16

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Lynn Marie

Date: 8/9/2016 4:17:00 PM

A bold, bright Haiku that feels like it was as fun to read as it was for you to write it. Very clever writing, I enjoy your work immensely. blessings, lynn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2016 3:45:00 PM

Sorry you did not see the rule for this one about your first time here. this was nice, but I never heard of Chihuly. Is it an artist as Jan says here? Don't feel bad. In the recent contest of nette, Soup would not allow me to enter the contest so I ended up with insomnia from worry over that little thing. I am crazy!!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/6/2016 7:32:00 AM

Very clever use of the artist in the final line James - so creative:-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman
Date: 6/6/2016 7:47:00 AM

Thanks Jan, a touch of humor.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/31/2016 12:29:00 AM

those colors have me in a daze, awesome ... enjoyed the read... ~Linda~

James Inman
Date: 5/31/2016 6:34:00 AM

Thank you PD. Thanks for the visit.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/26/2016 10:31:00 AM

Wunderbar mein freund, James! Wonderful dear, James! First? Imagine the second!

James Inman
Date: 5/26/2016 10:54:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios, actually a new poem. The contest rules required the date you join PS or the date of your first post. I didn't make that clear.

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/24/2016 4:26:00 PM

bright colors and vocabulary :)

James Inman
Date: 5/24/2016 8:23:00 PM

Casarah, don't know if you've experienced Chihuly glass art but I really like it, although some of it reminds me of the little drops of spittle you see if you sneeze in front of a mirror and if they were in color. lol