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Geometrics of a Corn Similar

Helmet-wearing stripe Humanoid-cylinder slash Ignited in lime

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/2/2009 9:12:00 AM
teach me to write hakus better?? haha
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Date: 8/10/2009 2:52:00 PM
Good image- eddie
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Date: 7/16/2009 3:48:00 PM
The vivid imagery conveys your thoughts in a creative way. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 7/10/2009 12:19:00 AM
Nice!
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Date: 7/9/2009 8:02:00 PM
Wow, what a creative description! Excellent haiku, Cesar! Love, Carolyn
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