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Gently Cuddling Night

Trails of night bring rays one by one; sparkling air - breaths quieting calm and fragrant… stars glisten hours as blown prayers lift sighs that, mildly wisped, doubt is undone. Joy restores spirit tired cuddling gently Night. ---- Night gently cuddling tired spirit restores joy. Undone is doubt, wisped mildly, that, sights lift prayers blown as hours glisten stars fragrant and calm... quieting breaths air sparkling - one by one ; rays bring night of Trails. ------- Backwards Poem for Brian's Select 7

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John Hamilton

Date: 8/17/2016 12:50:00 PM

Just a wonderful poem, so so difficult this form, I couldn't do one, so I applaud your talent!

Laura Leiser

Date: 8/16/2016 2:42:00 PM

Very pretty poem, Nette. Congrats on your win:)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/16/2016 2:20:00 PM

beautiful flow to both poems Netter - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman

Date: 8/16/2016 12:44:00 PM

One of the best I've read Nette. Reads smoothly in both directions and has great content.

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 8/16/2016 11:51:00 AM

Congrats on your placement. Enjoyed the read. :) Sunita

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/16/2016 11:43:00 AM

Lovely, Nette - both ways! Congrats on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/16/2016 11:28:00 AM

Your poem shapes up nicely! Congratulations on your top win!

Lu Loo

Date: 8/16/2016 11:17:00 AM

Nette! so beautiful lady, I love the layout and the flow was perfect and what I was looking for. Congrats on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/5/2016 9:27:00 AM

wow.....will print and post to my poetry board at home! very cool! the second diamond is my favorite, with a soft opening....lines 5/6/7 of both diamonds are very exciting! jimbo

Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/5/2016 8:09:00 AM

I am impressed that anyone can do this form, my brain goes crazy when I try and I end up cross-eyed. I am especially impressed when the form contents are meaningful and of matter that touches me. Yours does just that, especially the 2nd verse ... CayCay

John Hamilton

Date: 8/4/2016 10:03:00 PM

Just wonderful writing Nette, is it sighs or sights? A very difficult assignment I would not even try to attempt, but you did it with ease!

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/4/2016 3:17:00 PM

Nette, is there anything you can't write? Well done as usual. I admire your talent for poetry. It is truly a gift. Thank you for sharing.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/4/2016 2:31:00 PM

- A lovely backwards poems, Nette - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Manny Paras

Date: 8/4/2016 2:25:00 PM

Yes, every majestic poem from you is a total experience. Woman, I share the sparkle of this lustrous night!

Rhoma Em

Date: 8/4/2016 1:52:00 PM

Goodness, tremendous description of a night gentle and brimming with creativity. Your talent as a poet is unquestionable!