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Gentle Winds

Gentle Winds It seemed that she was lost for words in a forest of memories thoughts dangled from branches letters blew in the wind some punctuation mingled with emotion seedlings of love hope and understanding over-standing inner and outer winds of change no need for epic compilations just one final first whisper said … ‘Stanza’ the clown 12 July 2016 One Stanza – One Only – Poetry Contest Sponsored by Broken Wings

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Date: 8/13/2016 4:41:00 AM
Now ths I is wordy, ..but very worthy, clever and engaging, rolls easy and the personalisation becomes believable...well done...this is a much better comfort zone to reading narratives from pamphlets....Ian
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 8/13/2016 7:59:00 AM
Thank you Ian. I take your point...
Date: 7/23/2016 9:12:00 PM
I like the unique combination of wind, words and trees that you linked together. Congrats on your placement! Blessings!
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/24/2016 12:59:00 PM
Thank you very much. Support needed and appreciated, Kai
Date: 7/19/2016 10:57:00 PM
Nicely composed verse. Congratulations for your impressive 5th place win in the One Staza One-Only contest! Jesse
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/24/2016 12:59:00 PM
Thank you very much. Take care, Kai
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/24/2016 12:48:00 PM
Thank you for that. It is hard for me to keep it short, but very good practice. Best greetings.

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