Gentle Winds

Gentle winds stirs oats Peace, quiet, gentle wind moves All in solitude

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James Fraser

Date: 9/22/2009 4:06:00 AM

Tranquil Haiku>>James

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 9/20/2009 10:20:00 PM

Very well written Haiku. I like the gently movement I feel in this poem. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

Abe Lopez

Date: 9/20/2009 4:34:00 PM

Avery peaceful read Sara ...very nice!

John Freeman

Date: 9/20/2009 3:52:00 PM

Just something peaceful about a gentle wind, Sara, and you've captured it in your well written Haiku. Thanks for sharing, this inspiring write, keep writing, and I'll keep reading. Sincerely Moses

Thomas Stanton

Date: 9/20/2009 5:30:00 AM

....this poem allowed my bipolar needed but ever hated half to sleep-i hear the surf and the endless surge and am coforted by the oceans deep sleep- thank you