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Gentle Rapids

The outpour spouts gently. My lone thoughts drain bitterly as pearly chutes ebb Soft patter of rapids flushes night from angst. Though barren stream dives endless And pierced rocks lash at my lost chances. The twirl of water eases love's blow While I dive into an evening's pool like a rapid swollen by gray spills. For nette onclaud Manny Paras dated 10 30 2014

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Date: 11/9/2014 4:31:00 AM
I love your comparrison of the waterfalls uncertainty with your heartache! Brilliant! I really loved your entry Manny. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/8/2014 8:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem Manny
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Date: 11/8/2014 4:43:00 AM
Lovely write, congrats on the win
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Date: 11/7/2014 2:10:00 AM
goodness, I like the line breaks and total impact of your work, many..thank you for being part of my contest with my sweet congrats!
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Date: 11/6/2014 9:59:00 PM
Awesome imagery I am enjoying with this one. BIG congrats in the contest.
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Date: 11/6/2014 9:34:00 PM
A wonderfully unique take on the theme... well written and thought provoking... Congratulations!!
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Date: 11/6/2014 6:56:00 PM
Great write, Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/6/2014 3:28:00 PM
Beautifully penned many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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