Genocide

His Spirit moves over me as I see Something that could be good, will depeople My tax dollars will go for genocide Lord have mercy on this very great people Not only will this cost pass on to states God who loves earth how long will you abide Lord have mercy on this very great people My tax dollars will go for genocide We won't be fit for the kingdom of God This nation is to be an example My tax dollars will go for genocide Lord have mercy on this very great people If we do good, centuple blessings come When we do bad, God's grace can not abide Lord have mercy on this very great people My tax dollars will go for genocide (First attempt at Mirrored Refrain..Thank you Jared for the challenge..Not an entry in the contest.)

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/28/2010 3:34:00 AM

Sara, You have certainly put into words the fears that have been running through my mind with this poem. Is it was because of sinful ways? Plenty of prayer and repentance, would change things. Shall we and see? (Soupmail) With Love and Concern, Dane Ann

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/26/2010 6:57:00 AM

Moving and stirring..thought provoking Sara.. a good attempt at Jared's required form ... by the way.. look on your list of poems as one title is blank..don't know if u noticed it today..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Mitch White

Date: 3/26/2010 4:22:00 AM

It speaks out to us, the people. No uncertain terms either! Great write- I think this form is verrrrrrry challenging

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/26/2010 3:47:00 AM

We here in Germany have the same problems!!! Great verses, Sara! Keep writing....Ant thanky your for your comments...Gert

Lynette Chachere

Date: 3/25/2010 6:17:00 PM

wow, i enjoyed the rhyme in your poem. it makes sense and its a great poem. well as we know, there will always be "the idiots".its human nature.they won't quit doing what they do to people.the horrible things they want, why, no'good' reason, but there is no care for anyone, or anything else in the mind of these decision maker(s). -Always&Forever Lynette

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/25/2010 5:52:00 PM

Love it mom, great write

John Freeman

Date: 3/25/2010 5:31:00 PM

Sara the point is very plain, we are forced to pay tax that are spent on things we do not agree with. The truth is gloden. Thanks for your comment. Agape, Moses