Genie

Your words Are like a genie in a bottle They loosen themselves And rise at the merest touch Of my hand To my tears.

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Date: 11/8/2016 12:17:00 PM

Dear Madeleine, genie of tears , lovely write...Congratulations on top win!//love,Anu:)

Date: 11/5/2016 10:40:00 AM

A 7 for this lovely, moving, WINNING poem, Madeleine! Janice

Madeleine Mclaughlin
Date: 11/5/2016 1:44:00 PM

Thanks for the seven.

Date: 11/5/2016 8:07:00 AM

Such an interesting simile, Madeleine. Congrats on your placement. Agnes

Madeleine Mclaughlin
Date: 11/5/2016 1:43:00 PM

thank you.

Date: 11/5/2016 3:45:00 AM

Amazing! Many congrats on your fine win, Madeleine. Lainey

Madeleine Mclaughlin
Date: 11/5/2016 1:43:00 PM

Thanks very much.

Date: 11/4/2016 5:18:00 AM

A single drop that one hears. Peace and many blessings to you.

Madeleine Mclaughlin
Date: 11/5/2016 1:44:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment.

Date: 11/3/2016 9:34:00 AM

Sadly beautiful Madeleine. This poem was really nice.

Madeleine Mclaughlin
Date: 11/5/2016 1:44:00 PM

Thanks.