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Generic Bleach

Little do I care if bleach is generic Or if fabric softener or detergent Some bad personality flaws become chronic Little do I care, if well you really meant What brings me care is negative remarks spoken_ Harsh words pour forth like rain released kinetic Energy, power released never to be unbroken Words that leave my heart's state of being semantic Semantic=Affected role

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Red Fiery

Date: 5/29/2011 12:10:00 PM

i agree with your views sara ! Very well written

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/29/2011 2:49:00 AM

You are right Sara, i think we are being tricked in the markets... nice poem,, can be a lesson,,, god bless,..p.d.

Kash Poet

Date: 5/28/2011 9:20:00 PM

So true the above words Sara.Enjoyed.

James Foulk

Date: 5/28/2011 11:13:00 AM

its all about making more money, Generic things work just as well. love you write, very creative. thank you for commenting on Puddles on sidewalk

Skat A

Date: 5/27/2011 9:06:00 PM

really xool

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 5/27/2011 6:27:00 PM

* “I Do Agree With Your Beauty * Beautiful Sara. * First Whom Is Perfect & We All Fall * Second That Yesss Words Can Linger * Time Hopefully Irons Out These Wrinkles of Ones Self * Yet Even Then Amid The State of Frailty Flesh Resides Within * Perfection Shall Have to Wait * But * I Love Your Wisdoms Voice Here * Along With The Beauty of Your Depthful Heart. * Hugs & Kissses * Kissses & Hugs * Always & Forever * Sarah” *

Matt Hunt

Date: 5/27/2011 4:04:00 PM

Very good twist. I enjoyed this one very much.

Anne Rutherford

Date: 5/27/2011 3:45:00 PM

Sara , you are so right about harsh words , even if someone says sorry, they stay in your soul never to be unspoken .Profound poem. Anne

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/27/2011 2:24:00 PM

negative anything is so very hurtful and harmful to the human spirit as being made in the image of God we should all shine positive lights.. a brilliant piece my friend with much said in this magnificent poem luv.. happy holiday weekend to u..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/27/2011 1:27:00 PM

I agree with this message, both on the personal level and even about generic bleach! Interesting write. Luv, Andrea