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V: You say that you know But I don’t Its nothing Slow to the know Fast to give up Not something C: You bask in that Pitiful delusion Hold my hand to the sky Will it wake? V: The children want But they don’t They crave Fast to the end Quick to step off To the early grave

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Date: 9/2/2014 6:31:00 PM
Keith, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 9/2/2014 8:24:00 AM
Keith, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/2/2014 6:17:00 AM
Welcome to PSoup.... Your talent will be recognized ... Post more and read mere.... I like this initial post..... Jake
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Date: 9/1/2014 1:14:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Keith - I choose your first great written poem- You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/31/2014 10:20:00 PM
Hi Keith, I wish you a warm welcome to PoetrySoup - happy writings! Pandita
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Date: 8/31/2014 9:59:00 AM
Very interesting and it makes you think about you words. Welcome to poetry soup btw. Come check me out. :)
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Date: 8/31/2014 9:59:00 AM
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