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Gene and Gilda

Star crossed champions of mirth Wild hair and wild eyes, both To the world they say with arms raised to the sky, "What a pity, for we dearly love to laugh!" Arm in arm, singing their favorite show tunes But in the voices of Donald Duck and Calamity Jane Gallivanting through the city, doing the Charleston in the street These two have no interest or talent for growing up And made the world lighter because of it Willy Wonka in his purple jacket, Holding the door for her with his cane, Him with those dreamy eyes Pale eyes that swim in her perpetual smile A smile, a voice and a soul that lit up everything for miles She sits, glowing in the window, Like a princess in the white room, wearing her little barrette But she isn't well at all And so she left this world, Roseannadanna did, one morning And the twinkle in his eye twinkled off into space With her dimples, impromptu cartwheels and spinning skirts Four years wasn't enough to fill up the laughing box The glass elevator is lonely looking down on the world Wait, wait, wait, BAM! Would she want him sinking there in his spats? A wop, bam, boo! No, choose instead to keep that wicked grin Dance down the aisle of the plane, show that funny funny face Embrace each Saturday Night gone by To Gene and Gilda, geniuses of love and light hearts Pop the cork on the champagne and roller skate through this life! ~For Heather Ober's Famous Couples/Duos Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/15/2013 8:58:00 PM
Jeremy, Congratulations with your winning poem in Heather's "Famous Couples/Duos" contest. ~Always* Linda
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Date: 4/12/2013 3:49:00 PM
Great pick, wonderful comic genuises! VERY sophisticated choice [man I feel stupid now LOL] should have been higher! way higher Light & Love
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Date: 4/12/2013 1:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved placement. Good one, Jeremy :)
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Date: 4/12/2013 1:03:00 PM
Congrats, Jeremy. Excellent. Ralph
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Date: 4/12/2013 12:34:00 PM
Congrats on your win~ A.O
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Date: 4/11/2013 4:29:00 AM
congrats on your win in the contest, a well written story on this pair :)
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 4/18/2013 6:53:00 AM
Thank you, Charlotte.
Date: 4/10/2013 9:18:00 PM
Tremendous job, congratulations.
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 4/18/2013 6:46:00 AM
Hey, thanks, Richard.
Date: 4/10/2013 7:10:00 PM
A very loved and fated pair. Good job. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/18/2013 6:45:00 AM
Thank you, Joyce.
Date: 4/10/2013 5:48:00 PM
this is a beautiful tribute to a wonderful and very funny pair. i love it!
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 4/18/2013 6:45:00 AM
Thanks, Ilene!
Date: 4/10/2013 3:52:00 PM
Congratulations Jeremy...wonderful win!!!! :-)
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 4/10/2013 5:35:00 PM
Thanks Donna!
Date: 4/10/2013 10:22:00 AM
Congratulations Jeremy xx
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 4/10/2013 5:35:00 PM
Thanx Mandy :)
Date: 4/10/2013 9:35:00 AM
Jeremy, this poem is showing up on the winners list as 6th, but I meant to rank it 3rd. I have no idea how to edit this - I don't think it's possible :( Just know that I LOVED reading your poem. You are such a skilled free verse writer. Big congratulations on your win in my contest, and I'm sorry for the judging error!
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 4/10/2013 5:34:00 PM
Much appreciated, Heather!! Awesome contest
Date: 4/9/2013 3:04:00 PM
oh, I just LOVE the couple you chose to emulate. I feel they were truly in love and their story is a sad one but for a while they knew happiness. LIke Suz said, I agree this is brilliant. A fave.
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 4/10/2013 5:34:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea!!!!
Date: 4/6/2013 12:42:00 AM
Wow this is brilliant...you have captured their spirits....a winner in my eyes.
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 4/6/2013 7:19:00 AM
Really kind of you, thanks Suzanne!

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