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Gems of Love

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Bright stars shine in night skies Like bangles, baubles and beads Puts a twinkle in every girl's eyes Like a gift of fine jewelry A pair of sun stone earrings Presented to the daughter I love Some expensive fatherly bling The price for her, one hug Red copper reflecting inclusions Dark middles fade to light edges An adventurine feldspar illusion Perfect for eternal love pledges Turquoise blue or teal green schiller Either one is an eye to heart thriller October 21 2016 ladies ring size 7 1/2 color: teal green

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2016 4:04:00 PM

heehee!! silly me (I can't seem to find a poem to comment to and I'm running late. Let me know if there are recent ones I have missed, will you?)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/24/2016 11:47:00 PM

This is wonderful, DANNY!!! I love it. And hey, your girl has my ring size!!

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/25/2016 8:39:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. You're so silly:)

Supraja Kannan

Date: 10/24/2016 7:52:00 AM

Oh A big 7..This is so lovely....Beautifully written....Good luck with the contest....

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/25/2016 8:37:00 AM

Thank you Supraja:)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/23/2016 7:37:00 PM

If it's a daughter, son , or grandchild you want to spoil that is just the love that is inside the person that is giving.... Hug Eve

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/23/2016 8:19:00 PM

Thank you, Mrs Eve. Yes, I guess I did spoil them a little but they still turned out better than I did. i appreciate your kind comments:)

Mike Hauser

Date: 10/23/2016 6:27:00 PM

Beautiful!

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/23/2016 8:18:00 PM

Thanks, Mike. I appreciate it.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/23/2016 4:18:00 PM

a gem for life, daniel.. you shine with sentimentality!..huggs

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/23/2016 4:40:00 PM

Thank you, nette. I do love my children:) I appreciate your kind comments.

Phillip Garcia

Date: 10/23/2016 8:52:00 AM

:) you ol' sap you. Beautiful as only you can pen beauty. Well done DT

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/23/2016 4:39:00 PM

Thank you, Phillip. I sure got you buffaloed. Lol

Carol B.

Date: 10/22/2016 11:20:00 PM

Love the poem and the sentiment in this piece. Lucky girl to have such a loving father. Beautiful as always :) A fav.

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/23/2016 4:26:00 PM

Thank you, Carol. I really appreciate your kind comments:)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/22/2016 12:19:00 PM

I don't know much about jewelry, Daniel, but this poem sparked my interest in learning about them. Very nice poem. Love and peace.

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/23/2016 4:25:00 PM

Thank you, Freddie. I appreciate your kind comments. i didn't know a lot either until I had a daughter. Daddies have to learn those sorts of things:)

Keith Logan

Date: 10/22/2016 7:39:00 AM

Things can balance out in time. My daughter-in-law is like to me, that daughter I never had.

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/22/2016 8:44:00 AM

Thank you, Keith. I understand completely. I'm sure she's a wonderful young lady. I appreciate your kind comments.

Paloma P

Date: 10/22/2016 5:52:00 AM

This is definitely a gem, Like a huge hug within your poetry. Warm and embracing. A jewel, proud papa. So fine. :)

Paloma P
Date: 10/22/2016 10:28:00 AM

Kids are meant to be spoiled, it's the price we pay for fooling around. :)

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/22/2016 8:43:00 AM

Thank you, Paloma. Yes my children, although spoiled, are a source of pride for me. They are my greatest accomplishment. I appreciate your kind comments.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/22/2016 4:02:00 AM

Oh so touching Daniel - I love the line about the price, one hug. I am sure she treasures this lovely gift:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/22/2016 8:41:00 AM

Thank you, Jan. Yes, I know for a fact she wears them quite a bit. I appreciate your kind comments. How are your eyes? You feeling OK? Did you get your hearing aid? Hoping all is well with you.

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/22/2016 1:46:00 AM

So nice, touching and lovely ... itself a gem ...

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/22/2016 8:39:00 AM

Thank you, Probir. You are very kind.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/22/2016 12:17:00 AM

Aww, Daniel this is such a heartfelt write. There's nothing like a father's love. It's something us girls hold deep in our hearts. It is evident how much you love your daughter in this piece. Yes she adores the jewelry but it doesn't come close to the one that "gave " them to her. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A undeniable SEVEN: -) Alexis

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/22/2016 8:39:00 AM

Thank you, Alexis. Yes, there is something special about that father daughter bond. I appreciate your kind comments and high marks:)