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Gemini Heart

Meet me in forever, where the moon enclasps the enchanting heaven above us, for you, are the music playing on loop, and we are like unrhymed verses, dancing amongst lyrical constellations~ waiting to be aligned as a sign of love. Sometimes, obsidian hearts will never feel the raging fire they rise above and beyond, as untamable phoenixes, ascending in burning hues, to the eden in our warm embrace, interlaced with soft summer skies, where love finally feels safe, flowing in silvery aisles across a lake of flaring firestones, a home for dreamers, residing in fields of ever blue forget-me-nots. When twin souls are entwined, by sacred wings of angels, descending through vermilion gold beginnings, I question every nightingale that sings~ what could be the melody that would unveil the tune to orchestrate my own universe? As I keep fighting the urge to disappear sometimes, to silence these deafening screams in my head. As everyday, I am different, somedays my conscience confuses my spirit, that this love is like a fever- a disaster waiting to occur, running in foggy breezes, leaving me gasping for air. When overthinking is a poison, my mind fears these crippling changes, echoing through our favorite songs. So, how will I ever be able to right every wrong, without my savior that saved me from dreary dark dawns of December? Perhaps, this was pre-written in untold sagas of romance, I am only complete, when I am within the coincidental half of your gemini heart. Here, I wait, alone tonight, until you become mine, so meet me in forever, where luminous clouds unravel perpetual purple flickers in our sight.

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Date: 1/31/2024 3:17:00 AM
Dear Ink, A gigantic gold rush of seamless transitions, rich romantic references, glowing visuals, and tender templates buttresses this peerless piece. Those who are privileged to read this have been pampered with gemstone verses. “When twin souls are entwined by sacred wings of angels, descending through vermilion gold beginnings” is my personal favourite. But there are so many. Sincere thanks for your reflections on my recent post from someone of your stature. Warm wishes Howard
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Date: 1/21/2024 4:13:00 PM
What a beautifully romantic poem- I liked this "confuses my spirit, that this love is like a fever- a disaster waiting to occur, running in foggy breezes, leaving me gasping for air."- what a deeply honest way of expressing it, and I also like the quote by John Lennon, it worked well. A fav! Always know the gem that you are, a pleasure, just me!
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Date: 1/20/2024 7:45:00 PM
Thank you for such a heartfelt poem. Can love be without heartbreaks? A little misalignment, such as trifling separation, is a testament to your patience waiting for perpetual purple flickers to entwine. Obsidian hearts would be jealous of your volcanic heat. Bravo.
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Date: 1/20/2024 11:53:00 AM
OMG we are so different in style. I see what you were talking about. I can relate to an obsidian heart...but is it breakable because it is volcanic glass, or is it hard and dark like a stone. I have a big piece of it outside my door, and will be thinking of you now every time I pass by it. Perpetual is a difficult concept. I think about where the universe comes from and what happens to all of us. Better to experience as much as possible along the way in case there's no second chance.
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Date: 1/19/2024 1:48:00 PM
I especially enjoyed this, masterpiece stanzaii "untamable phoenixes, ascending in burning hues, to the eden in our warm embrace, interlaced with soft summer skies, where love finally feels safe, flowing in silvery aisles across a lake of flaring firestones, a home for dreamers, residing in fields of ever blue forget-me-nots. When twin souls are entwined, by sacred wings of angels, ...gemini...fever...(wetted by) foggy breezes... purple ... sight" I wish I had more characers space.
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Date: 1/19/2024 12:48:00 AM
Very romantic and poignantly so
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/19/2024 1:56:00 AM
Dear Andrea, thank you so very much for your comment. I appreciate your presence always
Date: 1/18/2024 10:36:00 AM
Dear Ink Empress, Your poem is a wonderful deep exploration of love and self-discovery. The vivid imagery and emotive language create a captivating narrative that resonates deeply with me. The journey through fear, confusion, and longing, to eventual acceptance and hope, is beautifully portrayed. Your words are a testament to the transformative power of love. I loved this poem! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 1/19/2024 2:02:00 AM
Dear Daniel, your thoughts and feedback means alot to me, as you are one of the new fave poets here on soup for me. Thank you so very much for your kind and detailed analysis. Grateful
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Date: 1/18/2024 10:39:00 AM
Good Luck on the Contest for this is definitely a winner!
Date: 1/18/2024 6:48:00 AM
Truly a fantastic poet your are Ink Empress! Your ability to create such depth of meaning in such an image filled and gorgeous manner is so impressive! Just a wonderful write!! Happy Thursday!
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Date: 1/19/2024 2:03:00 AM
Dear Mike thank you so very much truly for your kind and generous feedback. Always a pleasure hearing from you. Happy friday!
Date: 1/18/2024 5:54:00 AM
This felt like being on a rollercoaster of emotions and wanting the ride to keep going. Well done!
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Date: 1/19/2024 2:07:00 AM
Yes richard my thoughts can sometimes sound like that. Thank you so much truly: for your kind feedback. Grateful
Date: 1/18/2024 2:55:00 AM
I read this expressive poem a couple of times, Empress; it's beautiful and romantic in a most delightful way (definitely nothing soppy about it). Love is most worthy when it reaches the heights of completion! ~ a fav ~ Warm regards // paul
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Date: 1/19/2024 2:19:00 AM
This means alot coming from a talented poet like you Paul, thank you so very much for the fave and also the detailed thoughts on this love poem: appreciate your visits always. Grateful
Date: 1/18/2024 2:46:00 AM
Emotion of love is so well exploited. You are a wonderful poet.
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/19/2024 2:19:00 AM
Thank you that means alot truly victor im grateful for your support
Date: 1/17/2024 2:49:00 PM
Powerful one word title of a lovely poem! A favorite for sure dear lovely sweet Ink :-)
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Date: 1/19/2024 2:30:00 AM
Dear Abdullah i appreciate your support always truly. Thank you so very much
Date: 1/17/2024 1:54:00 PM
A love poem of deep emotion. I noted the care and tension as romance progresses.
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/19/2024 2:32:00 AM
I appreciate your constant support always dear hilda, grateful for your poetic presence
Date: 1/17/2024 11:42:00 AM
This one is really romantic Inky, you must have written it for one you really love and I see he/she is a Gemini, they say be careful of that star sign, but not all are the same, I know one is very sincere... I can see the dedication and devotion you have for them and how you rely on them, in particular in the following verse, "I am only complete, when I am within the coincidental half of your Gemini heart." I wonder how compatible Gemini and Capricorns are?
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Date: 1/17/2024 11:42:00 AM
Overall you poem is a beautiful ode to your beloved.. Best of luck in the contest..
Date: 1/17/2024 10:12:00 AM
With an alluring opening line your poem invites and extols romance: Meet me in forever, where the moon enclasps the enchanting heaven above us---and it gets better from there : where love finally feels safe, flowing in silvery aisles across a lake of flaring firestones, a home for dreamers. Excellent as always, Ink. A FAVE!
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/19/2024 2:50:00 AM
Dear Vijay, im so grateful for your poetic presence truly. Soup wouldnt be the same without supportive poets like you constantly there to lift others up. Grateful for your support always
Date: 1/17/2024 9:49:00 AM
Ahh!! Romantic lines penned. Thanks for sharing your feelings with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 1/19/2024 2:54:00 AM
Thank you always for your kind support
Date: 1/17/2024 8:47:00 AM
such a touching and sublime poem, dear Ink. All the images were beautiful, but I especially liked "When twin souls are entwined, by sacred wings of angels" I agree with Sotto, you captured the desire to be united with a soulmate in a timeless place." I remember so desperately wanting that before I met Bill. My soul ached as if I was missing a part of me. This is a deep, romantic poem...one worthy of Cupid. Seriously! Am faving this one, for it touched me deeply, hugs, Sara
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Date: 1/19/2024 3:06:00 AM
Awwn thank you so much, i felt the same before i met my beloved. And its like finding home finally. Thank you for sharing your love story with us. Its so beautiful and i love listening to it. Sending you and bill more blessings together always
Date: 1/17/2024 8:41:00 AM
The eternal love and the desire to be united with a soulmate in a timeless and enchanting place, dear Ink, is a precious query—you use rich and vivid language to convey these emotions and imagery of the poem. The word choice is evocative, with phrases like "enchanting heaven," "unrhymed verses," "lyrical constellations," and "vermilion gold beginnings" creating a dreamy and romantic atmosphere.
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Date: 1/17/2024 8:12:00 AM
Oh dear beautiful Ink, this is purely heavenly.. You've described all the intricacies of love and those vivid feelings, combining darkness and light, so effortlessly here..Your words just glided in my mind and drizzled so gorgeously with a wonderful lyrical cadence.So true, sometimes our overthinking hearts even tend to question magic and in those times, the beloved rises like a saviour and making you believe in the 'forever' of affection..Just so heartfelt and soulful this is especially the end
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Date: 1/17/2024 8:15:00 AM
"Meet me in forever,where the moon enclasps the enchanting heaven above us, for you, are the music playing on loop", "purple flickers in our sight" Ahh, such elegant wordplay throughout with feelings and depth.. I absolutely love everything about it!! With artistic metaphors, wordplay, adjective and alliteration, you've made everything flow together so effortlessly.. A fav, best of luck for the contest too! :)
Date: 1/17/2024 7:56:00 AM
Dear Empress: I just feel like a feather floating down in your words. Gorgeous phrasing of ethereal feelings. floating…..floating. Made me feel better from my nasty ‘flu. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 1/17/2024 7:21:00 AM
moon enclasps the enchanting heaven above us,.. there u go taking my breath away papi!! soft summer skies, ooo alliterations!!! where love finally feels safe, twin souls are entwined, by sacred wings of angels, descending through vermilion gold beginnings.. mmm soo in love with that line!! I am only complete, when I am within the coincidental half of your gemini heart…. until you become mine, U soo romantic papi!!! I be blushing aeee … ok take me now !!! I oil up for u!!!
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Date: 1/17/2024 7:17:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Ink...especially love how you end it :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 1/17/2024 6:21:00 AM
I wish I can write like you . You just write so beautifully. I wrote a little something . I’ll upload shortly
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2024 6:21:00 AM
Yeay! Im excited dahlin cant wait to read

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