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Gem In the Green

In the fields by the shore where trees are evergreen and birds chirp in unison. It was a picture-perfect. Amid stood a figure of fair, genuine beauty that blossom flowers. Sited she was. A picturesque. Like a spell cast upon me, I was lost in oblivion. O! my heart, be still It was now or never, my moment of truth, teetering I proceeded in gust She was still, like silence I felt the air radiating with her fragrance of body and hair She could feel her ambiance shift She sensed it. Felt it. As my hand brushed her shoulder and I said... Inspired by close pals K. Dennis & K. Donkor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/29/2015 12:56:00 AM
Congratulations on a wonderful win. Bravo! Pandita
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 5/29/2015 2:30:00 AM
Thank you, Pandita!! Really grateful..... Hope you found your gem in the green!
Date: 5/28/2015 3:10:00 PM
WILFRED, Congratulations, that is all :-) **SKAT WAS HERE** <---- copy paste.... hardy har har
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 5/29/2015 2:28:00 AM
SKAT!!!! I humbly appreciate all your words of encouragement.... Really priceless to me! Thank you!
Date: 9/19/2013 4:40:00 AM
Big congrats on your firth place win Wilfred that's a well deserved win!!!
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Date: 9/18/2013 2:24:00 PM
enjoyed your winning poem ............ luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/13/2013 9:17:00 AM
Wilfred, , stopping by with hugs & smiles:-) xox (-: CONGRATULATIONS :) on your win. Enjoy my blog "You know where my heart is" when you have time. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15906&PoetID=18720 Always & Forever xox-Linda-xox
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Date: 9/6/2013 8:00:00 AM
I like the unspoken question left at the end..Enjoyed reading your passionate work this moring..Sara
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 9/13/2013 6:36:00 AM
Thanks, Sara!!!!!!
Date: 9/5/2013 4:07:00 PM
Hi Wilfred, i can see how green the world can be.. : ) This poem put me in beautiful green haze with blushing spots all over. Beautifully written. I must say you definitely chose the right title for this very moment... xox~ Linda
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 9/6/2013 7:01:00 AM
Thanks Linda...! You continue to be an inspiration, giving more to desire!!! Thanks again!!!!!!!!!

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