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Geese Squawking Askew

. Geese squawking askew V-formation out of form Headed south too late / / / \ \ \ \ \ \ \ Must be young geese No strong leader First flight home No I will not ask for directions (Haiku/Free Verse and what else who knows)

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Date: 8/11/2013 6:52:00 PM
I love this progression.....out of sync with the other geese...just as in nature ! Nicely done!
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Date: 1/14/2011 3:08:00 PM
Nice Haiku Sara, there must be some who straggle behind....:)
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Date: 12/13/2010 7:19:00 AM
luv your sili count
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Date: 12/11/2010 5:27:00 PM
I give you the top mark for daring and the experiment. I likede it. Regards and thanks from Gerard.
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Date: 12/10/2010 7:11:00 PM
hahah,a, humorous ones too!!
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Date: 12/10/2010 1:38:00 PM
Dear Sara: Love this poem. The diagram added to the poem's story. Thank you 4 reading and commenting on my poem. Peace: sheol
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Date: 12/10/2010 11:02:00 AM
Sara, what a clever haiku, enjoyed tonight.. Hope your weekend will be a good one ;)
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Date: 12/10/2010 10:56:00 AM
Smiles, Sara. The leader of this flock must be a guy if he won't ask for directions. Clever poem enhanced by a creative layout!
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Date: 12/10/2010 6:55:00 AM
Such a great write this one Sara.. the V formation with no strong leader.. how interesting the concept of this piece... enjoyed the view today with luv... SOUP MAIL...
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