Geese

Black silhouetted Geese fly along the shore South Bound for winter's home Wandering weather Predication stations, free, no Cost, reliable

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John Freeman

Date: 12/11/2009 7:23:00 PM

For sure the predication stations are free, few things in our human environment are. smile. Good write, Sara, Sincerely, Love, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/11/2009 4:25:00 AM

Very interesting poetry you have posted today Sara. I enjoyed reading it. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/10/2009 2:56:00 PM

Aren't they amazing....how they seem to know where there is a "vacancy sign" waiting? Great poem, Sara! ~ Carrie

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/10/2009 2:25:00 PM

Geese are such majestic birds...you have painted a vivid visual with your words...thanks so much for sharing~Mary

James Fraser

Date: 12/10/2009 12:03:00 PM

Sara, are'nt the Geese beautiful birds >> lovely Choka >> James

Jared Pickett

Date: 12/10/2009 9:17:00 AM

NICE..... I really like this simple Choka....Keep em comin'....:JP]

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 12/10/2009 6:40:00 AM

Interesting second verse. Not to be nitpicky but I think the second line may need to be trimmed down by one syllable. You had me check my choka on Van Gogh so the 5- 7- 7 is fresh in my mind...at any rate the verse leaves me scratching my head a bit. I'll take a guess though, the weather in today's world is far more unpredicatable and shifty and the poor geese have their internal compasses going wild trying to find south....nah I dunno, I'll scratch my head some more. thanks for sharing Sara.

Marchioness Of Mock Turtles

Date: 12/10/2009 6:18:00 AM

Hiya, I just wanted to thank you for the comment you wrote, and the little poem you put in was epic :) I didn't know how to send a reply, so I decided to post a reply comment on one of your poems, and one you named after a type of bird seemed fairly apt. Also, this poem I'm commenting on is brilliant, and I'm not just saying that because you complimented mine. Actually writing Haiku is a world harder than it looks, and I've never been able to get it down, so much respect to you. :)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/10/2009 5:32:00 AM

interesting poem, I saw geese this morning flying over the school.