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Gazing At the Stars

I see everything when I gaze at the stars I see the world at its best and at its worst I laugh out loud for all the times in front of my elders I accidently cursed I gaze at the waves of water wondering if they will ever clash down on the drama that seems to stop the dreams of so many I wish peace on torn promises sadly there are plenty there I stand hypnotized by truth the one who controls my every burning desire within I become one with the air... I take a deep breath and just ride the wind letting nothing get me down for I was born to go and be so high

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Date: 10/24/2009 2:41:00 PM
You have me smiling at the end. Interesting perspective for the reader to think about. Glad you don't let things get you down. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen
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