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Gazelle Eyes

My love, my world revolves around your mystifying gazelle eyes-- When you look at me My day begins, When you lower them My sun sets! ~Visual 3 / Words 25 Abdul Malik 06/12/15 "Through Your Eyes" contest by nette Onclaud

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/23/2015 9:25:00 PM

this is so nice. I just love the title! Congrats.

Skat A

Date: 6/22/2015 4:33:00 PM

Hi Abdul:) Congratulations on your win. Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/22/2015 3:42:00 PM

Abdul, Congratulations awesomely done. LINDA

Paul Callus

Date: 6/22/2015 2:46:00 PM

I love this take, especially the final 4 lines!! Congratulations on your win...much deserved, Abdul. // paul

Abdul Malik
Date: 6/22/2015 5:18:00 PM

I am a sucker for beautiful eyes! They haunt me for days. Glad you liked it. Thanks.

John Lawless

Date: 6/22/2015 7:17:00 AM

well done, well deserving of the win

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/22/2015 2:23:00 AM

lovely well captured Abdul congrats on win hugs

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/21/2015 8:51:00 PM

very pretty piece, congrats on your win

Jan Allison

Date: 6/21/2015 3:20:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations Abdul:-) hugs Jan xx

Abdul Malik
Date: 6/22/2015 5:10:00 PM

Thanks Jan, YOUR eyes don't lie. Glad you were the first to read.

Mohamed Adel

Date: 6/15/2015 11:04:00 AM

That was charming! keep it up, Abdul Malik :)

Abdul Malik
Date: 6/22/2015 5:19:00 PM

Thanks Mohamed. Happy Ramadan to you.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/13/2015 6:35:00 PM

In MY eyes this is simply exquisite Abdul:-) good luck n the contest:-) hugs jan xx 7