Gaslight

,,,,))),,,, twigs of winding stairs climb glassy mirror of time``` old memories wiped saintly gaslight tails fill lungs with pure crystal breaths ``` new beginnings sprout all rights reserved © ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, (( for ^ Rick Parise's " Haiku Beyond" ))

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George Aul

Date: 4/1/2011 9:11:00 AM

Congrats on your win....great job ........ George

Eiken Laan

Date: 3/29/2011 10:40:00 AM

Nette, wonderful haiku, well done on your win:))

Kash Poet

Date: 3/29/2011 9:01:00 AM

Saintly poem Nette!Congrats on your 1st place win--kashinath

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/28/2011 5:59:00 PM

!! This is beautiful, Nette! So deserving of Ist Place! Sweet serenity! Congratulations! Love, Annalise

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/28/2011 2:31:00 PM

Lovely imagery! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/28/2011 12:47:00 PM

breathtaking, Nette!!! Congrats on another well deserved win!!! :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/28/2011 12:38:00 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of ick, nette

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/28/2011 12:34:00 PM

Way to go, Nette! Congratulations on your first-place with with this terrific haiku! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman

Date: 3/28/2011 12:08:00 PM

So great to see you at the top Nette. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored first place. You're looking good at the top. Agape, Moses

Carol Fillmore

Date: 3/28/2011 12:06:00 PM

Congrats Nette on your first place in this contest WooHoo! Enjoy the glory of this placement, well deserved:) hugs, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/28/2011 11:51:00 AM

ohohohohohohohohohohoh..how happy u are at the top Nette my friend..congrats on a well deserved first place win in Rick's contest luv.. awesome as always ..and up where the air is as rare as your great fantastic words luv..

Ray Dillard

Date: 3/28/2011 9:59:00 AM

May your crown shine as the stars above. Congratulations! RAY

Sidney Beck

Date: 3/28/2011 9:00:00 AM

marvellous...glad my lines were some use to you......heartiest congratulations Nette...you is a true genius

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/28/2011 8:01:00 AM

Winners all the way, love these again Nette. Harry

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/28/2011 7:49:00 AM

Oh this is beautiful Nette. many congrats dear friend.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/28/2011 7:11:00 AM

Congratulations Nette on your 1st Place win in ^Rick Parise's contest "Haiku Beyond". Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/28/2011 5:50:00 AM

Nette! Bravo. And well done. Everything in this poem speaks to your awesome creativity. Congrats..keep on creating masterful work. Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/25/2011 3:34:00 PM

A unique and well-penned haiku, Nette. Like the "saintly gaslight tails." Maybe that's what they really are! Love, Carolyn

Carol Fillmore

Date: 3/25/2011 2:18:00 PM

beautiful images, Nette! really like 'fill lungs with pure crystal breaths'!! Best of luck in "Haiku Beyond" contest:)) Thanks for your comments and best wishes in contest for "Raccoon Went A Wooing" ... so much fun to write, had a big smile on my face whole time while writing! Acrostic form did work very well for this poem... Hugs my friend!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/24/2011 10:17:00 AM

I must tell you there have been so many diverse poems shared here at PoetrySoup yesterday and this morning that I am just now being able to read. Each one is a treasure to the poet who wrote it. It is a pleasure to me to be able to read them. I am so happy yours was among the ones I have read today Nette and the best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/24/2011 8:13:00 AM

another imaginative write from you, Nette! Good luck !!

Kash Poet

Date: 3/24/2011 7:35:00 AM

Pure crystal delight here nette,enjoyed-kashinath

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/24/2011 6:50:00 AM

Great one that reads like winners' circle to me..Enjoyed reading...Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/24/2011 5:43:00 AM

Exquisite Haiku Nette my dear friend.. awesome visuals overrun this piece line after line... luv the title .. and fill lungs with pur crystal breaths.. new beginnings sprout my friend.. good luck in Rick's contest.. I see another top ten in your future ...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/24/2011 12:38:00 AM

awesome, I think I just lost another contest. ahhaha. LUv, Andrea