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Gaseous Moon

There was a moon man from Titan Who out gased who ever he was fightin' When his eyes saw red He blew off his head And anyone near him was lightnin'

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John Loving Iii

Date: 3/15/2010 5:37:00 PM

sometimes i talk to Him. and while i'm talking He'll say something funny. and sometimes i say something funny. i can't tell you if he laughs. but i can tell you this; God has told a few punch lines that were really funny. duck. john

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/15/2010 5:00:00 PM

enjoyed

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2010 1:18:00 PM

Hahaha, this one is wild, Deb. Is it the one for the contest? Luv ya, Andrea

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 3/15/2010 11:20:00 AM

Hi Deborah, I have been reading some of your recent writting and in hoamge i wrote , Ladies in answer to your Questiom , I hope you Enjoy Love Chris

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/15/2010 4:50:00 AM

Deborah, Thank you for your most welcomed recent comments on my blog. “Another quick SURVEY- Is Monoku for you?” It was definitely fun to read the diverse responses. (A gaseous moon man...ha, ha.) XOXOX Dane Ann

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/15/2010 3:43:00 AM

Great sense of humor DG, loved this one...Raul

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/14/2010 8:07:00 PM

Good one! I love these limericks..this one is so funny. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/14/2010 8:02:00 PM

In Ninja Turtle form: U made a "funny" .. and a good funny too... good luck in the new contest... this one is a GAS.. ah.. pardon the pun..hon..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/14/2010 5:39:00 PM

Great out of space Limerick that should do well in the contest if you have entered it...Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara