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Gardens of Things Unspoken

Countless rose bushes I've grown But none with this many thorns None sowed through so much scorn None before destined to be this alone None that grew so out of control Leaving me so helpless I could swear it had a life all its own I can’t help but marvel at its form Such a vivid red, Complimenting the darkest of green So much beauty, Hidden never to be seen Eventually the petals will fall, And it'll wither from existence A miracle, That made no difference Wasted on a Garden of Darkness Of a Gardener of things Unspoken.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/23/2016 8:42:00 PM
Judas ZZ, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 5/26/2011 6:49:00 AM
Thank you for sharing the heart of your poetry with us here at Poetrysoup. I enjoyed reading your fasinating poetry this morning and I look forward to reading more of your poetry Judas. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/26/2011 4:27:00 AM
meaningful and deep expressions on life, Judas
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Date: 5/25/2011 6:57:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight.. hope u enjoy PS as u continue to share with luv..
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Date: 5/25/2011 3:40:00 PM
Thanks a lot Leo. Spellcheckers and I don't get a long too well. Glad you enjoyed it!
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Date: 5/25/2011 3:23:00 PM
A good piece of work, quite enjoyable...but, you might want to check the spelling of a couple of words and correct them ("thrones" or "thorns" and "peddles" or "petals"?)
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