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Garden's Beauty

Its charm, its bloom
A gift of spring breeze
Disappears fast
Something not oozing from heart
Something borrowed doesn’t last

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  1. Date: 9/7/2014 1:22:00 AM
    This is a beautiful powerful piece! Excellent write! Pandita

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 1/21/2015 3:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your appreciation of my Japanese Tanka Garden's Beauty. You are very kind. Love. -Mohammad
    Yamin Avatar Hamida Yamin
    Date: 1/21/2015 3:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your appreciation of my Tanka Garden's Beauty. You are very kind. Love. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 6/16/2013 4:14:00 PM
    You are so right. Thanks for sharing. ..... Licilla

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 1/21/2015 3:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your educated comments, Lucilla. I am grateful.
    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 1/21/2015 3:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your educated comments, Lucilla. I am grateful.
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 7:38:00 AM
    - Just want to say: - Have a nice day Mohammad - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 1/21/2015 4:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sorry for this belated reply, Anne. Your comment was not communicated to me. I am reading it just today per chance. Thanks for visiting my Tanka and for your appreciation. Love. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 5/13/2013 11:30:00 PM
    It sounds sad...Love Diana

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 1/21/2015 4:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It is sad, indeed, Diana Darling. Everything created must perish. Love. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 4/15/2013 7:39:00 PM
    Hi my friend, so nice to read this wonderful verse. the last line is priceless and certainly describes not only gardens but so many other fleeting things in our liives. Love, Lizzie

    Yamin Avatar Hamida Yamin
    Date: 1/21/2015 3:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Although belated, I wish to thank you for your uplifting comments. Love. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 3/14/2013 3:30:00 PM
    Mohammad, you capture the joy of a lovely garden well, nice work

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 1:04:00 PM
    Gorgeous garden and written beautifully, Mohammad. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 3/15/2013 12:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Anne for your encouraging comments. Best wishes.
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 11:31:00 AM
    Great work that you have penned...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 3/12/2013 12:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for visiting my Tanka. Your remarks are most uplifting.
  1. Date: 3/2/2013 11:53:00 PM
    yes, everything so ephemeral. (I hope I used that word correctly!)

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 3/6/2013 12:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You are so right. I should have myself used the word ephemeral in the poem but didn't for syllable restriction.