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Garden's Beauty

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Below is the poem entitled Garden's Beauty which was written by poet Mohammad Yamin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Garden's Beauty

Its charm, its bloom
A gift of spring breeze
Disappears fast
Something not oozing from heart
Something borrowed doesn’t last

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  1. Date: 9/7/2014 1:22:00 AM
    This is a beautiful powerful piece! Excellent write! Pandita

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 4:14:00 PM
    You are so right. Thanks for sharing. ..... Licilla

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 7:38:00 AM
    - Just want to say: - Have a nice day Mohammad - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 11:30:00 PM
    It sounds sad...Love Diana

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 7:39:00 PM
    Hi my friend, so nice to read this wonderful verse. the last line is priceless and certainly describes not only gardens but so many other fleeting things in our liives. Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 3:30:00 PM
    Mohammad, you capture the joy of a lovely garden well, nice work

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 1:04:00 PM
    Gorgeous garden and written beautifully, Mohammad. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 3/15/2013 12:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Anne for your encouraging comments. Best wishes.
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 11:31:00 AM
    Great work that you have penned...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 3/12/2013 12:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for visiting my Tanka. Your remarks are most uplifting.
  1. Date: 3/2/2013 11:53:00 PM
    yes, everything so ephemeral. (I hope I used that word correctly!)

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 3/6/2013 12:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are so right. I should have myself used the word ephemeral in the poem but didn't for syllable restriction.