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Gardens at Keukenhoff (Alouette) As the tulips rise With their sweet surprise Fragrance permeates the air Colors cover land From God's divine hand In these gardens we all share. Such astounding views Come enjoy the hues As varied blossoms cascade. Seek a bench to gaze At the mirror maze With lush tulips on parade. 2-19-19 Gardens Poetry Contest~Premiere Fourth Place~ Sponsor Chantelle Anne Cooke The Alouette, created by Jan Turner, consists of two or more stanzas of 6 lines each, with the following set rules: Meter: 5, 5, 7, 5, 5, 7 Rhyme Scheme: a, a, b, c, c, b The form name is a French word meaning 'skylark' or larks that fly high, the association to the lark's song being appropriate for the musical quality of this form. The word 'Alouette' can also mean a children's song (usually sung in a group), and although this poetry form is not necessarily for children's poetry (but can be applied that way), it is reminiscent of that style of short lines. Preference for the meter accent is on the third syllable of each line

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Date: 4/2/2019 8:05:00 AM
Tulips are a favorite of mine and so is your poem!
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Date: 3/24/2019 1:25:00 PM
aA beautiful poem, Connie You captured this city of tulips very well I know because I was there being in Holland for two years.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/2/2019 9:20:00 AM
It is one of my favorite cities. I have vacationed there four times. The gardens were a highlight! Thank you Ralph. xxoo
Date: 3/22/2019 2:41:00 PM
had to read this - loved visiting this place & you've captured it perfectly. interesting form too - must try it
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Date: 3/14/2019 6:10:00 AM
Tranquillity personified. Fantastic poem. Shame more people don't frequent our parks as much as they used to. Nothing like inhaling the many fragrances a garden can give us. best regards David in NZ
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Date: 3/12/2019 7:15:00 PM
G'day Connie … written so well and with a theme to hold interest. You certainly have a great writing gift Connie - thank you - Lindsay
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Date: 3/11/2019 11:15:00 AM
Hi Connie, such beautiful gardens and such a beautiful poem that paints such strongly beautiful images into the mind.I like the form, you have used it well in this beautiful write. A Fave. have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/11/2019 12:54:00 PM
Thank you so much Mike. I spent the weekend with my little seven year old granddaughters. They are such a joy. You have a lovely week. Soon spring will be here. xxoo : )
Date: 3/7/2019 6:40:00 PM
Yes, I wonder if Jan T. is ok. I remember she was getting her house all ready for retirement. That was ten whole years ago!!
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Date: 3/4/2019 7:37:00 AM
Keukenhoff Gardens are beautiful, and so is your poem, Connie (ably written in this lovely form). Regards // paul
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/7/2019 7:14:00 PM
Thank you Paul. I really like Jan's form and have written several poems that are Alouettes. : ) xxoo
Date: 3/3/2019 9:22:00 AM
A great delight to have found and read this bright morn, this superbly crafted poem my dear friend. A definite fav for me..
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Date: 3/3/2019 6:35:00 PM
Thank you so much my dear friend. I so appreciate the fav! I have not been able to be here at PS for the past week and have missed reading a lot of wonderful poems. I am now caught up on your poetry posted Robert and I was inspired by your poetry to write my latest post I dedicated to you. Blessings, Connie : ) xxoo
Date: 3/1/2019 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations for your win :)
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Date: 3/1/2019 11:29:00 AM
Back with more congrats, Connie.
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Date: 2/28/2019 1:07:00 PM
Excellent as always Connie. Love the pic. Exceptional. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/26/2019 12:16:00 AM
Back with a big congratulations on your awesome win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/25/2019 2:47:00 PM
Lovely, Connie. You did justice to the form. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/25/2019 1:19:00 PM
How lovely this garden is, Connie, and your description is spot on! In the center, that even looks like a tulip tree. Your poem is uplifting and a joy to read. Hugs, carolyn
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/25/2019 2:17:00 PM
Thank you very much Carolyn. Both my daughters went with me and I have such fond memories from that trip. xxoo : )
Date: 2/25/2019 2:41:00 AM
- I grew up in a tulip garden .... my father loved tulips and was so proud of them - Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/25/2019 2:18:00 PM
Thank you very much. It is such a beautiful place. Both my daughters went with me on that visit. : ) xxoo
Date: 2/23/2019 11:33:00 PM
So beautiful! Saved it as a favorite.
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Date: 2/25/2019 1:53:00 PM
Oh thank you so much Carol. I really appreciate that. It is a stunni g place to visit. : ) xxoo
Date: 2/23/2019 8:06:00 PM
love the line, "tulips on parade"...beautiful imagery of the garden and it's surrounds my friend .. good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/25/2019 2:22:00 PM
Thank you Eve, I was very happy to make the list. : ) xxoo
Date: 2/23/2019 12:38:00 PM
Lovely, I can hear the children sing...
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Date: 2/25/2019 2:24:00 PM
Thank you Charlie. I taught the song to my children and grandchildren. : ) xxoo
Date: 2/21/2019 10:07:00 PM
Connie, a lovely poem and an interesting form, I must give that a whirl ~
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Date: 2/25/2019 2:25:00 PM
Thank you Constance. Congratulations on your top win! : ) xxoo
Date: 2/21/2019 8:21:00 PM
You created a splendid example of that form. Gosh, Connie. I have not heard from our Jan Turner in YEARS. Remember all the creative forms she came up with?? She must be in her early 70's by now. Have you heard anything about her? Also, didn't you post your "feelings" poem? I was looking for it.
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Date: 2/25/2019 2:06:00 PM
No, Jan is not at any place I know about. Perhaps she has health issues. I do enjoy writing in her Alouette form. Thank you Andrea. I put a few in the book I just made for my granddaughter. : ) xxoo
Date: 2/20/2019 12:37:00 PM
Beautiful verse about a beautiful place. Vera and I visited there when I was assigned with the AF in Frankfurt Germany during the mid-60s. This will rate at the top of the winner's list for sure! Bob H
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Date: 2/25/2019 2:14:00 PM
Well coming in fourth is fine with me Robert. I was very happy to make the winner's list. I am happy you liked it. : ) xxoo
Date: 2/20/2019 9:20:00 AM
The form looks difficult to execute..but as always, your poem is beautiful like the photo you posted. Best for a win, Connie.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/25/2019 2:03:00 PM
It is a simple form but you are right, it is more difficult because of the syllable restrictions. Thank you Vijay! : )
Date: 2/20/2019 8:09:00 AM
Oh so beautiful! Thanks for sharing :)
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Date: 2/20/2019 5:25:00 AM
Enjoyed your verse Connie, nothing beats a beautiful garden like the one you write about. Tom.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/25/2019 2:00:00 PM
So true Tom. It was heavenly. Thank you very much! xxoo ; )
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