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Garden Poems

Mist over the pond, Morning bliss responds to light: Lavender in bloom. · New purple roses, Surround the Japanese bridge: In lilac aura. · Vast purple petals, Mixed phlox and lilies fresh scent, Perfume morning air. · Soft sunlight appears, Lush gardens bathe in warm rays: Dissipating mist. · A mauve perspective, The warm light casts reflections, Of the French landscape. · A colorist scene, Scrutinizing color change: Unwritten poems.

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Date: 10/5/2009 7:33:00 PM
Again, great coloring!! @.@ Your describing is awsome soft @.@ thanks for the experience=D
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Date: 10/5/2009 7:23:00 PM
very monet'esque. peacefully written!
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Date: 10/4/2009 12:32:00 PM
Two words " Incredibly Beautiful "
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Date: 10/4/2009 8:56:00 AM
Its truly beautiful. You have painted a masterpiece with words. Reminded so much of my mothers garden, a bittersweet memory from the past, for her garden is in heaven now. Very nicely done
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Date: 10/4/2009 5:04:00 AM
This is simply beautiful, Raul! Your images are so clear and bright in this lovely Choka, my talented friend! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/4/2009 12:57:00 AM
a garden of poems, colors,a garden of flowers all booming in their own way..i love the french landscape,France mesmerizing..i feel warmth in this poem Raul..love the last stanza scrutinizing color change..and the ending -questioning unwritten poems...-well penned--Charma
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Date: 10/3/2009 10:57:00 PM
very enjoyable! Raul!... jim
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Date: 10/3/2009 3:43:00 PM
This is so Beautifully Written ... It is showing glorious in the Mortal Realm ... The Colors, The Atmosphere, The Thought ! (See, I Told You, you were a Metaphysical Poet - Nothing Less (smile) Excellent Poem Raul - Going into my FAV's ! MoonBee
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Date: 10/3/2009 3:40:00 PM
I want to be at this place...the French garden...a place that inspires such poetry! Lovely !!!!
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