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Garden Party

All dressed in green, the rose bush beams like a child's blushing cheeks and pursed lips; these debutants jilted by bees forever wanting to be kissed. A carpet of phlox giggles like a young lady and drips over the wall like a Dali clock, tickled by fingers of lilies and daisies still waiting to dance, demurely frocked. Impatiens wink at the pansy's goodbyes, while hostas and petunias wave. In the light of the late springtime sky all in the garden would rave. No need for people, they've nothing to prove because flowers can party too! ~Through a wisteria laden arbor~ Ah, the robins are here rummaging in the grass and they just left the blueberries over the hedge, a glutinous embarrassment for sure, but as deer prance so properly, I'd rather robins instead; at least they don't consume the guests, or should I say, permanent party participants. Like a "who done it" dinner it's a safe bet they'll win, if the catnip and snapdragons can't. What's the purpose of being pretty; ogled and cut by people and eaten by deer - it's the talk of the party and nasty. Gossip is (don't tell) that our favorite guests aren't here, the honey and the bumbles do tickle and tease and though perhaps used, we're left pleased. Modern/Contemporary Sonnet (mixed meter-slant rhyme-uneven line length)

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Date: 5/19/2023 12:00:00 PM
Rather delightful, Graig. I did not have you figured for a Salvador Dali fan ...:)
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Suzette Richards
Date: 5/19/2023 10:51:00 PM
lol ... I had to fight many glass ceilings during my career and the 'attitude' stuck. :)
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Craig Cornish
Date: 5/19/2023 1:49:00 PM
No - I occasionally droop over walls (not on purpose). I can equally offend and charm - a uomo universale if you will - yes no ego problem?! Though my wife says I'm many things but not boring? You seem to be of that ilk (no offense) yourself -- way too much fun to be other!
Date: 6/14/2019 12:52:00 PM
Storybook... Wonderful. Ty Ann
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Date: 3/31/2019 8:43:00 PM
Nicely done, Craig, you make the dinner sound so musical. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/31/2019 10:44:00 AM
Fun, creative garden poem. Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 3/30/2019 5:49:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Craig! DELIGHTFUL! Janice
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Date: 3/30/2019 2:48:00 PM
Craig, this is great fun! Why wasn't I invited? Oh yeah, "No need for people." Congratulations on your second-place win on Mile 27 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest. Your support of my contest has contributed to its success, and for that I am very grateful. ~Mark
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Date: 5/31/2018 4:59:00 PM
Ohhhhh....I like it very much. My kind of sonnet! Your words are so unique and creative and I love how I feel reading it...like a trip down the rabbit hole. (and I missed out on all that in the 60s) Lol. Very cool write! I'm going to give this form of sonnet a whirl. Thank you!
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Date: 6/3/2017 6:16:00 AM
Great sonnets, Craig, love the creative thought of flowers partying and animals and birds playing spoilsports :)
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Craig Cornish
Date: 6/3/2017 9:40:00 AM
Thanks Jo
Date: 6/2/2017 10:04:00 PM
ah Craig, you are so good at sonnets and especially about nature poems! This is gorgeous.
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Craig Cornish
Date: 6/3/2017 9:41:00 AM
Very kind Becca, Thank You!

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