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Garden of Rock and Stones

As I walk here in this place Faceless names in an empty space Seasons brush by without anyone watching The ticks of the clocks, without anyone taking Sad memoirs etched on cold stone Bodies covered wrapped and all alone Gray bouquets weathered in the wind Someone’s Mother Someone’s Father sister or brother Somewhere someone weeps for his or her relatives Loss of sleep As the fall leaves sweep Over the grave of a spirit now asleep And the leaves fail with their colors, so pale Over the name with a crackle so stale

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/5/2008 11:16:00 PM
Laura this was beautiful - as a child the only memory I had of my mother was the day she drowned and it was my only dream most of my life - All I had of her was a headstone and I used to ride my bike out and take her flowers and trim around her headstone - And as your poem says - clean away the leaves - This poem touched me deeply - God bless
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Date: 9/29/2008 2:16:00 PM
Each is a life with a story attached. When I visit my in-laws and my mother's graves, I sometimes read the dates on others and wonder. Life itself is a mystery and no one has been able to adequately describe what lies beyond in the second part of our journey. Autumn and cemetaries have a strange connection. Vince
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Date: 9/28/2008 7:40:00 AM
Awesome my friend, you capture the season and the season of man so very well in this poem. Love it. Regards Heidie
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Date: 9/25/2008 3:48:00 PM
it's like we know that death is a part of life but yet death still exists and it's hard but jaust one facet of life, sad and painful write, take care D-nyce
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Date: 9/25/2008 11:33:00 AM
yes a chilling piece of fine poetry.
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Date: 9/23/2008 1:54:00 PM
Leaves me with a chill...that cool evening wind that blows in the fall. Very nicely done. I always have loved the poetry that emotes the seasons, and gives them a different life than expected. Looking forward toreading more of your poetry. My best, Charlie
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Date: 9/23/2008 6:55:00 AM
Autumn, the change in the season, can seem like a season of death as the leaves crumple and color fades. Here it seem as if its autumn in a cemetery. Imagery conveys clearly and the feeling is such a sad one, but very well written. Michael
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Date: 9/23/2008 5:45:00 AM
Vivid imagery with a mood so so bleak and well captured. A well written reminder of our mortality. A remembrance of personal loss for me. Truly excellent write. Love, Shar
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Date: 9/23/2008 5:26:00 AM
The imagry here is very misty and blue, very sad indeed. beautiful, Laura, love Kristin
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