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Garden of Grief

Like a flower, about to bloom, Though instead, growing in gloom, The 'healthy' soil 'helping' us grow, Filled with toxins, sprouting so slow. Look at them, loving their life, Stunning, spectacular, strutting with strife, Under the skin, it's not what we see, Confidence is flat, with low self-esteem. He looks so careless, handsome, dreamy, How I wish he would really like me, But does he actually act like he is? Is he exactly like everyone says? Skipping joyfully towards the car, Family with child, happy as they are, That was years ago, still the same? I'm afraid the apathy overcame. Look at that girl over there, Thin, pretty, doesn't really care, But how is that girl so petite? I'll tell you now, she barely eats. It's a horrible topic I hate to explain, But even 'perfect' people experience pain, So what if they look good? You do too! You just need to recognise the beauty in YOU.

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Date: 9/28/2023 12:16:00 PM
So true. Beauty within is what matters: i love what you’ve conveyed here, and the flow of words and the title is brilliant, very well crafted with such descriptive diction! Impeccable write
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Date: 9/28/2023 2:51:00 PM
I am so glad you believe that too, this exactly the message I'm trying to spread across, your comment means so much! :)
Date: 9/28/2023 6:06:00 AM
So true and so well written. you are inspiring.
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Date: 9/28/2023 2:52:00 PM
I have read some of your poems too and they are truly meaningful. I feel great that you think the same of my poems <3
Date: 9/27/2023 2:05:00 AM
What a lovely, heartfelt inspiring poem. This is so well written and a great title. Great rhyming and lines, ‘ Filled with toxins, growing so slow’ ‘I’m afraid the apathy overcame’. The last two lines are so positive and affirming. A great write and really enjoyed it. Thank you. :) :)
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Date: 9/27/2023 2:20:00 AM
thank you for sharing how my poem made you feel. i am so glad you enjoyed the lines i wrote, really means a lot more than you'd think :)
Date: 9/26/2023 9:57:00 PM
An amazing poem, such emotions and encouraging words displayed in this poem, thank you for writing this poem, I will read it whenever I feel useless and not worth it. - Phoenix :) ??????
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Date: 9/26/2023 9:59:00 PM
thank you so much for this comment and im glad it inspired you a little. i got a bit of inspiration from you to be myself, so thank you again for that too <3
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Date: 9/26/2023 9:58:00 PM
The ???? where meant to be love hearts. - Phoenix :)

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