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Garden of Eden

Into the Garden of Eden he fell And slipped away from this life. New visions had been created, weighted down, the task of an army, non-too calmly blowing fresh winds, fresh thoughts through his veins. Taking away the pains and brought hope, adventure, ambitions, new additions they brought a new history, a mystery to those around. But. Everything important was then taken, forsaken and his life was over slipping away into monotony, a labotomy filled with inertia filled with the past. He dreams, he lives all in his mind, free of the binds where no-one can intrude, create an interlude to this life of eternal bliss the past pi**** away and slowly his feet dipped, slipped into the Garden of Eden.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/21/2009 3:48:00 PM
Aahh.. This Poem had The Double Meaning... It could be applied to the actual Adam (a new history, a new mystery, everything taken, forsaken) But it could apply to the present-day, the incidents everyday people face, life of monotony, labotomy (smile), inertia, thru his veins (powerful words) then this person finds own garden of Eden... I especially liked the phrases, new visions and 'task of an Army.. I get it.. To correct the problem... And the army was sent. "An Army of One. Loved it. MoonBee
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Date: 9/19/2009 4:44:00 PM
Interesting way to approach the topic. Keep writing. Sara
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