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Garden of Agony in Alliteration

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Garden of Agony in Alliteration

Gorgeous green garden
Filled with fantastic flowers
Three tremendous trees
Tall enough to hide tormented towers

There dwells a dark demolisher
In this garden, green with grief
Suffocating me in senseless sorrow
Being brutalized, my breath becomes brief

You might see many marvelous plants
But these plants grow a poisonous pain
Vomiting very venomous fumes
As agony fills me up again

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 10:06:00 AM
    beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!

    Alcin Avatar Julie Alcin
    Date: 3/30/2013 11:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words