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Garden

GARDEN Derived from a purity unknown A natural resource, a source not shown We derive from truth From the tree of the fruit We have been brought up since youth To be flowers of the real, to not throw stones to stay connected to our roots Somewhere we became weeds smothering and choking vine A garden over grown Somehow down the line Our complaints turned mute Our muscles abandoned our bones Our soil hasn’t the minerals to feed We are kept separate, forced to be all alone. We bloom in the shade We are wilted brown from green. We stopped seeking the unknown

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/7/2015 8:53:00 PM
I detect some dissension among the ranks as they say in the military. Something has happened. An introduction to poems would help out to pave the way. Jim Horn
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Joel Thornton
Date: 8/9/2015 7:07:00 AM
Are you for real?
Date: 8/3/2015 3:24:00 AM
Deep visual but a good way to make your poem filled with the title traits! Excellent!`~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 8/2/2015 10:42:00 AM
lavish in images, joel.. very well done!.. hugggs
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Joel Thornton
Date: 8/2/2015 12:30:00 PM
Thanks so much.. ::Hugs back ::

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