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The light of his eyes are growing dim He creaks across the hard floor A mouth so large it holds a ton No longer remains doors Leaks and drips sometimes pour out fast Loud noises as dinosaurs But that mouth scoops up rank garbage It's as if an amour Soon retirement in the picture He doesn't want to be junked That yellow John Deere loader Man! A great machine hunk Every week day he is so busy He doesn't want to rest Up and going at six in the morn That is when he does best He's seen those loader graveyards on the way to be repaired If only they would oil and grease him as if they did cared He has been faithful to do his job Even though neglected Tears run down his radiator His metal is affected Sad to see the death of such a one it pains to see him go But life is short even in service The graveyard such a blow Inspired by contest:Garbage

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/30/2016 2:05:00 PM
love this thoughtful write
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Date: 7/28/2016 4:08:00 PM
A very good personification well thought of great poem x
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Date: 7/18/2016 8:52:00 PM
Love the way you bring such personalty to this big machine. Reminds me of an old red truck my husband drove when our girls were growing up. That old red Ford truck lasted until the two oldest were grown and married. When he finally traded t for a new one the girls cried and said it was like losing a family member. Great job. Well Done A seven fro me. God Bless, JB
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/19/2016 5:16:00 AM
Yes, a man's truck becomes part of him..One can recognize a man when they see the truck driving down the road..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Date: 7/17/2016 4:04:00 PM
Life of a garbage tractor!very well written Sara!
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Date: 7/16/2016 5:05:00 PM
Wow this is so different, got to be a winner, hope so!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/16/2016 5:29:00 PM
Well, maybe different will be good but sometimes people like old and boring..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Date: 7/15/2016 7:44:00 PM
Sara, great personification! jim
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/16/2016 5:29:00 PM
Glad that you like the personification..Thanks for the visit..Sara
Date: 7/15/2016 7:30:00 PM
this is really captivating,deep, sara... i like how you interpreted the theme!... huggs
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Date: 7/15/2016 7:02:00 PM
Hi Sara, This piece was so well written and creative. The Garbage contest inspired you to good write. A Big seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/15/2016 6:49:00 PM
Terrific Sara. You brought the tractor to life. I didnt know tractors had tears;-)
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