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'game Over'

her face was beaming her best kept secret exposed he could see the love 10/05/2011 Contest: Short Poem By: Wilma N. Neels 11th Place

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Duval Hyppolite

Date: 5/17/2011 7:02:00 AM

I choose that one to read well done

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/16/2011 11:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Judy's contest Wilma. Love,Carol

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/14/2011 4:38:00 AM

I agree with p.d. big smiles from this Art... I love it and in my favs it goes... love MJF

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2011 8:26:00 PM

wow,, this is the way a fun love begins... Wilma,, nice short poem and it says it all... good luck,, p.d.

Emma Buckeridge

Date: 5/13/2011 6:52:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win, Emma x

Jack Horne

Date: 5/12/2011 12:36:00 PM

Many congrats on your win, Wilma : )

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/12/2011 10:16:00 AM

Sweet Wilma, Congratulations on your win, Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 5/12/2011 7:39:00 AM

This is a little gem!Congrats Wilma on your win...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/12/2011 7:22:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of judy,Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2011 8:14:00 PM

oh, I just saw this one recently. Congratulations. Glad to see it won!

Judy Konos

Date: 5/11/2011 6:59:00 PM

Thank you for being in my contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/11/2011 4:09:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your super win in Short Poem contest my friend.. excellent entry as always..enjoy another sweet success..luv..

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 5/11/2011 2:54:00 PM

This is very good. Lots of underlying imagery. Excellent job and congrats. I really liked you made her female, nice touch.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/10/2011 7:15:00 PM

This is AWESOME. I love it, Wilma!!

Ralph Taylor

Date: 5/10/2011 2:17:00 PM

Beautiful piece, Wilma. Enjoyed. Hope this finds you well. Thanks for your kind words on my recent postings. Enjoy the rest of your week. best to you and yours. luv Ralph

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/10/2011 2:00:00 PM

Lovely signs of love conveyed thro good images, Wilma

Kash Poet

Date: 5/10/2011 11:21:00 AM

wonderful Senryu ....enjoyed..

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 5/10/2011 11:05:00 AM

* “Ow * Tis The Most Indiscribable of Beautiful Momments And Emotions * When Two Hearts Find Love * Beautiful Wilma” * again as but a blink ago i find myself envisioning this lovely verse * brings a smile and warmth to ones heart * for this happiness within another along with * the dreams of love inside oneself * “Soft & Beautiful” * hugs and kisses * kisses and hugs * sarah

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/10/2011 9:22:00 AM

Yup, game over indeed! haha traitor expression huh? hmmm is this inspired by somebody? oh wait have to look for your other write that you mentioned-- wish me luck that it doesn't take me a hundred years.... hugs to you :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/10/2011 9:02:00 AM

Smiles to you, Wilma! What a day brightener. There is no way to hide love that is felt so deeply. What a great senryu! Love and blessings, Carolyn

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/10/2011 8:27:00 AM

The secret is out....nicely scribed senryu. Appreciate reading your work on this site, Wilma. Any chance this female is YOU? :) Gwendolen

Manouchka Doreus

Date: 5/10/2011 7:49:00 AM

i can too. simple and beautiful