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'Game Over'

her face was beaming her best kept secret exposed he could see the love
10/05/2011 Contest: Short Poem By: Wilma N. Neels 11th Place

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  1. Date: 5/17/2011 7:02:00 AM
    I choose that one to read well done

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 11:29:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Judy's contest Wilma. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 5/14/2011 4:38:00 AM
    I agree with p.d. big smiles from this Art... I love it and in my favs it goes... love MJF

  1. Date: 5/13/2011 8:26:00 PM
    wow,, this is the way a fun love begins... Wilma,, nice short poem and it says it all... good luck,, p.d.

  1. Date: 5/13/2011 6:52:00 AM
    Many congratulations on your win, Emma x

  1. Date: 5/12/2011 12:36:00 PM
    Many congrats on your win, Wilma : )

  1. Date: 5/12/2011 10:16:00 AM
    Sweet Wilma, Congratulations on your win, Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/12/2011 7:39:00 AM
    This is a little gem!Congrats Wilma on your win...

  1. Date: 5/12/2011 7:22:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win in the contest of judy,Wilma

  1. Date: 5/11/2011 8:14:00 PM
    oh, I just saw this one recently. Congratulations. Glad to see it won!

  1. Date: 5/11/2011 6:59:00 PM
    Thank you for being in my contest

  1. Date: 5/11/2011 4:09:00 PM
    Congrats Wilma on your super win in Short Poem contest my friend.. excellent entry as always..enjoy another sweet success..luv..

  1. Date: 5/11/2011 2:54:00 PM
    This is very good. Lots of underlying imagery. Excellent job and congrats. I really liked you made her female, nice touch.

  1. Date: 5/10/2011 7:17:00 PM
    You have me smiling with this one. Much captured in just three lines. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind comment. Karen

  1. Date: 5/10/2011 7:15:00 PM
    This is AWESOME. I love it, Wilma!!

  1. Date: 5/10/2011 2:17:00 PM
    Beautiful piece, Wilma. Enjoyed. Hope this finds you well. Thanks for your kind words on my recent postings. Enjoy the rest of your week. best to you and yours. luv Ralph

  1. Date: 5/10/2011 2:00:00 PM
    Lovely signs of love conveyed thro good images, Wilma

  1. Date: 5/10/2011 11:21:00 AM
    wonderful Senryu ....enjoyed..

  1. Date: 5/10/2011 11:05:00 AM
    * “Ow * Tis The Most Indiscribable of Beautiful Momments And Emotions * When Two Hearts Find Love * Beautiful Wilma” * again as but a blink ago i find myself envisioning this lovely verse * brings a smile and warmth to ones heart * for this happiness within another along with * the dreams of love inside oneself * “Soft & Beautiful” * hugs and kisses * kisses and hugs * sarah

  1. Date: 5/10/2011 9:22:00 AM
    Yup, game over indeed! haha traitor expression huh? hmmm is this inspired by somebody? oh wait have to look for your other write that you mentioned-- wish me luck that it doesn't take me a hundred years.... hugs to you :)