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Galaxy of Love

As our star sets, our moon shall rise A star shall twinkle in your enchanted eyes. Use your enchantment to take a glance. Our star, our moon, a lustful romance The moon so innocent, a precious thing, yet our star is burning a desire within. A comet floats by overflowing with emotion, like a force held it down and injected love potion. Everyones happy, the wind, the rocks, even our winged friends floating in flocks. Yet out of the blue our star's flame died, the moon stopped glowing, the ocean lost its tide, the comet lost its emotion to see that moon cry yet something good will happen with those birds still flying. Keep your head up, my love still burns, and dont ever forget that our world still turns!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/12/2010 1:45:00 AM
beautiful!
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Date: 12/7/2010 5:09:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Robbie. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/4/2010 12:53:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with its creative theme... on luv... hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing... check out the contests too. .. good luck with luv..
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