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Galaxy Bum

A galaxy of bums shining in delight. Reflecting what your heart can't hold. The feeling that they're twinkling far beyond your reach confirming what your eyes been told. While dancing as if gliding on in outer space exhibiting the streaks of shooting stars. The silence almost deafening to the common face while screams seem muted to their scars. Their melody of motion soothing to your soul. Where asses seem to wander slow adrift. One wonders what the meaning takes to make you whole and if it isn't blessed or gift.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/8/2016 11:35:00 AM
Good flow and rhythm in this one..I enjoyed reading it..Welcome to soup..Sara
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Trevor Mcleod
Date: 10/8/2016 1:23:00 PM
Thanks Sara. I'm my worst critic though. I think the flow could have been improved a bit. The next poem always has to be better than the last I say. Now to follow my own advice if I can. *laughing* Trevor.
Date: 10/7/2016 10:26:00 AM
did you see "Hitchikers Guide to the Galaxy?" good soup!
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Trevor Mcleod
Date: 10/7/2016 10:37:00 AM
No but I might have seen parts of it. Maybe that influenced my poem some. Trevor
Date: 10/6/2016 7:46:00 PM
So very clever/Trevor!!!7+...Awesome, flow-feel along with perfect form:)...peace, love & light to safe harbour for you, yours and ours throughout matthew, jill
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Trevor Mcleod
Date: 10/7/2016 10:16:00 AM
Thank you so much. I appreciate the comment. They're always a lift. Hope you're enjoying Fall and the holidays.

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